Curse of the Galeb-Duhr

[chronoplasm]

Curse of the Galeb Duhr [Dwarf Racial Feat]
Prerequisite: Dwarf
Benefit: You gain a +5 bonus to saves against petrification.
You may replace an encounter power with the earth swim encounter power.

Earth Swim
Encounter
Move Action
Effect: You may burrow up to 3 + fortitude modifier squares.


Curse of the Azer [Dwarf Racial Feat]
Prerequisite: Dwarf
Benefit: You have resist 5 fire.
You may replace an encounter power with the warping flame encounter power.

Warping Flame
Encounter. Fire
Standard
Close burst 2
Target: Each creature in burst.
Attack: d12 + Fortitude modifer fire damage.

 

[Khuxan]

Curse of the Galeb Duhr [Dwarf Racial Feat]
Prerequisite: Dwarf
Benefit: You gain a +5 bonus to saves against petrification.
You may replace an encounter power with the earth swim encounter power.

Earth Swim
Encounter
Move Action
Effect: You may burrow up to 3 + fortitude modifier squares.

There's no such thing as a Fortitude modifier. Do you mean Constitution?
Petrification is a very rare effect, but I guess +5 is a substantial bonus.
It may be better to have earth swim replace a utility power rather than an encounter one.

Curse of the Azer [Dwarf Racial Feat]
Prerequisite: Dwarf
Benefit: You have resist 5 fire.
You may replace an encounter power with the warping flame encounter power.

Warping Flame
Encounter. Fire
Standard
Close burst 2
Target: Each creature in burst.
Attack: d12 + Fortitude modifer fire damage.

Again, I think you mean Constitution rather than Fortitude. You need to specify what attack roll is required, and against which defence. You also need to have this power increase in attack bonus and damage as the character levels (c.f. the dragonborn's breath) because there's no bonus from implements.

 

[Syrsuro]

The Earth Swim (assuming it is not also a Tunneling power) should work like Phasing (and other abilities) and specify that the character must end the movement in an unoccupied square.

And, imho, the damage from the Fire Warping (Warding?) seems to be very high. Perhaps something more akin to the damage of a Dragonborn breath (1d6+Con Modifier)? Especially if that damage is automatic (I would recommend requiring an attack roll).

Carl

 

[chronoplasm]

Crap. I am haunted by typos.

Curse of the Galeb Duhr [Dwarf Racial Feat]
Prerequisite: Dwarf
Benefit: You gain a +5 bonus to saves against petrification.
You may replace a utility power with the earth swim encounter power.

Earth Swim
Encounter
Move Action
Effect: You may burrow up to 3 + Constitution modifier squares. You must end the movement in an unoccupied square.


Curse of the Azer [Dwarf Racial Feat]
Prerequisite: Dwarf
Benefit: You have resist 5 fire.
You may replace an encounter power with the warping flame encounter power.

Warping Flame
Encounter. Fire
Standard
Close burst 2
Target: Each creature in burst.
Attack: Constitution vs. Reflex
Damage: 1d6 + Constitution modifer fire damage.
Level 11: 2d6 + Constitution modifier fire damage.
Level 21: 3d6 + Constitution modifier fire damage.

Better?