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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Rae ArdGaoth" data-source="post: 2124479" data-attributes="member: 21064">Krug:<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Your feats don't check out.  You have 9, I believe you should only have 8.  (4 for a standard L11 char, 4 more as Ftr bonus feats)  Did I miss something?</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">We're playing with Faerunian Regions, meaning your languages are a bit different and that you get some gear for free.  If you don't have the Player's Guide to Faerun, tell me and I'll work something out for you.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Just so you know, your Will save is actually 4 and 1/3.  (+2-1/3 Ftr, +4 Ddf)</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Like I told SomethingFaster, your first outfit is free and doesn't count against weight carried.  Add 2gp to your money on hand and subtract 5lbs from your total weight.  In addition, a potion weighs 1/10 of a lb.  So fix all your potion weights.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Speaking of total weight, you've added wrong.  You actually have 115.5lbs. of stuff (this is after subtracting 5lb for the outfit).</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">You've got 110 more gold than you think you do.  Your money on hand should now be 1172.5</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">If you would, please specify what exactly is in the bag of holding.  Actually, now that I look at that, your total weight is probably all off.  You should go through and recalculate it.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I'd like it if your bio was a bit more in depth, possibly detailing things like where he got his armor, what kind of encounters he experienced in guarding his home, etc.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">This is all purely aesthetic, but your formatting is kinda crazy.  Your tables are misaligned and your long lines of info have funky double spacing.  It's easier to read when it's all presented vertically or in bunches, at least.</li> </ul>Harvey: Nothing wrong at all.  You are 100% approved.silentspace: There's gotta be something wrong in there, but I can't find it.  You're 99.9% approved, which rounds up to 100%.The Gryphon: Your magic item costs are off by 10% of the original price.  I decided that you could take 15% off all of your magic items, as quoted here:I know, this screws up your inventory a lot, sorry.  On a side note, the clothing you are wearing never counts against your weight, so you don't need that alternate load thing.  Oh yeah, and your greatsword, originally it costs 21050gp, so your current cost is off.SomethingFaster: Those monk things we talked about, they are officially approved.  Email me your reworked character.  But still post it if you can.Kaitlin: Went over yours, a few things, others have pointed some out.  I won't do a thorough check and critique until you decide on a path, though.Ferrix: Still waiting for a submission.</blockquote>

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