[d20 Modern/Dreamwalker Revised] Looking for feedback on a preview

[demonspahn]

Hi everyone. I've been putting together a preview for Dreamwalker Revised for d20 Modern and could use some feedback to see if I've provided a good enough teaser. This is the first preview I've ever done so any comments would be appreciated.

http://home.att.net/~dreamwalkerrpg/Dreamwalker_Revised_Preview.pdf

Thanks

Pete