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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Lot" data-source="post: 2900190" data-attributes="member: 23740">[sblock=Rystil Arden]Erianna looks good.  It looks to me like you've used too many skill points.  I have you using 50 and according to my calculations, you should have 42.  Also, diplomacy is a cross-class for shapers but it seems like you have it as a class skill.  Let me know if I have it wrong.Also, here's some extra background I have in mind for you starting out.  Let me know what works for you.Erianna is a member of the Thyrzan family whom run the Thyrzan Trading House of Tyr.  Erianna's father, Telzon, was the second son of the house founder Crextin Thyrzan and became a professional student of the Way, much more interested the studies of the mind than of the complex iron trade of Tyr.  Erianna's uncle, Borrun, was the eldest son and became head of the company.  Ruthless and cunning, Borrun elevated the family trading company to a much higher level of business; only one tier below the powerful House Vordon of Tyr.  He has allowed his younger brother, Telzon, to continue with his studies unimpeded with business.  Telzon was arranged to marry Kallai of House Binz of Tyr and House Thyrzan grew more powerfulUnfortunately, Erianna, a natural psionic like her father, has fallen into trouble in the House.  Accused of an act of treachery and theft, Erianna has come under scrutiny from her uncle.  Deciding that this side of the family is too distant from the business and is taking without giving back, Borrun has decided to take Erianna on a business trip to Urik to get her more involved and to show her the labor behind the money her family enjoys.Once in Urik, Erianna was left out of almost all meetings and business affairs.  After a week in Urik, Borrun told Erianna to return to Tyr without him.  She was to make sure a large caravan of luxury items such as rare herbs, wine, and sugar made it to Tyr to be traded on the market.  Also, she was to send a message to her father.  House Thyrzan is to get a hold of as much iron as possible and send it to him in Urik as quickly as possible.  With that, she was left with the caravan.  On the trip, she has quickly befriended a pterran named Darkclaw Myllik, a psychic warrior whom is escorting goods on the same mekillot trading caravan.[/sblock]</blockquote>

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