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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Burne" data-source="post: 4399496" data-attributes="member: 3450">I like the class, but found the focus mechanic a bit confusing.  This is a rewrite that I hope keeps the same mechanics but matches the 4e style (I tried to set this up closer to the Warlock's Curse/Pact mechanic).Dervish FocusA Dervish focuses her whatever blah blahFocus<Insert focus mechanic here>Choose one of these two class abilitiesInner FocusWhen you are focused you gain a +1 power bonus to movement.<Power Block>Inner CalmEncounter, Immediate ReactionTrigger: A effect that can be ended with a saving throwEffect: You expend your focus to make a saving throw against all/some/triggered effects.Outer FocusWhen you are focused you gain a +1 power bonus to attacks<Power Block>Discern VulnerabilityEncounter, MinorEffect: You expend your focus to grant your next attack action the Dazing Strike Secondary Attack.  This effect lasts till the end of your next turn.Dazing StrikeSecondary Attack: Str vs FortSecondary Hit: Target is dazed till the end of your next turnI hope this help you out.</blockquote>