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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Jack7" data-source="post: 5155169" data-attributes="member: 54707">I think I may get that part of your criticism better now. My main concern with the line, and maybe this is the poet in me, is in the way the phrasing sounds in context and in proximity to one another. If I'm reading you right your criticism is also along the lines of a confused set of meanings because the term is used to imply two separate meanings in two separate phrases. Almost as if the meanings are competing rather than harmonizing because of the way they are expressed and juxtaposed.If that's what you mean, yeah, I can see that too.Language is interesting in what it can do, no?Not only in how it is expressed, but in how it is received.I was thinking the guy sounded like he should be in a Chronicle, or maybe a Saga.</blockquote>