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<blockquote data-quote="Corey Simons" data-source="post: 7287240" data-attributes="member: 6922370"><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">I have been creating a race for a while, and would like some feedback on it. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">My DM's love the idea of it so I figured I would throw it out there. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">If you like this, please thumbs up it so that I know I did well. THANK YOU! <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">I took quite a bit of time on this, so please don't claim this as your own. Thank you.</span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Nephalem</strong></span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Spawn of the cross breeding between Angel and Demon, the Nephalem is a creature of unique power. Made in the image of Human Mortals and due to their abnormal origins, the Nephalem are cast away to live among these mortals, hiding in plain sight. Rarest of all the races, Nephalem are considered to be a myth, spoken about only in the oldest of books and fabled stories. Orphaned and alone, many Nephalem do not realize their hidden potential throughout their long lives. They only believe themselves to be healthier, stronger and live longer than their counterparts due to the luck of the draw. </span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Superiority To Counterparts</strong></span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Brought up in the world by humans they follow their lesser, giving a helping hand when they can. Similar to Humans, the Nephalem are Physically diverse, but superior to Humans in every aspect. Due to the supernatural blood coursing through them, the Nephalem body is stronger and faster than the Humans they know so well. They can out pace them with ease and lift almost twice as much. A Nephalem can range from 6 feet to 7 feet tall on average and weigh 225 to 300 pounds consisting mostly of pure muscle. Nephalem skin shades range from nearly black to to very pale, but unlike their human counterparts, in the right lighting it is said that you can see an aura of midnight blue to blood red around them. Their hair color ranges from black to pure white; males might also sport facial hair that is sparse or thick. Nephalem reach adulthood in their early teens and often live over a century. </span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Nothing To Leave Behind</strong></span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Nephalem, like Humans, are extremely adaptable. Due to living around and being raised by humans, they too are ambitious people having widely varying tastes, morals, and customs similar to Humans. What sets them apart is that Nephalem are a steril race. Because of this flaw in their genes, Nephalem have the urge to leave a successful mark on the land having their names told about in story. They do not settle in place for long, constantly moving from location to location. This makes the Nephalem suited for the adventuring life so that their names can stand out in time. </span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Everyone Knows Your Different</strong></span></span></p><p></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Just like the Humans who raised them, Nephalem are able to mingle with almost every race. They create friends easily in all their travels and have a natural ability to memorize almost anything they seen or heard instantly (Locations, Names, Structures, Writing, Symbols, etc). Nephalem serve as ambassadors, diplomats, magistrates, merchants and functionaries of all kinds like their lesser counterparts. Unlike the Humans, almost every race seem to know a difference in the Nephalem. A powerful feeling comes over the other races which seems to be in the benefit of the Nephalem most of the time. </span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Nephalem Traits:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Being raised by Humans, in their image, made the Nephalem extremely versatile.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Ability Score Increase</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><em>Nephalem Versatility:</em></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">You have 4 points to spend in any ability with the maximum of 2 in any one ability.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Age:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Nephalem reach adulthood in their late teens and often live over a century.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Alignment:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Nephalem have demonic and angelic blood running through their veins, because of this a Nephalem does not have an innate tendency to choose a side in the war between good and evil, rather they sway between each extreme till their mid 20’s.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Size:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Nephalem range from 6 to 7 feet tall, weighing around 225 to 300 pounds mostly consisting of pure muscle. Regardless of your position, your size is Medium.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Speed:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Your base walking speed is 35 feet.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Nephalem Vision:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">Thanks to your Angelic and Demonic blood, you have superior vision in length as well as in the Dark and Dim Conditions. Can you see in dim light as if it were bright light within 120 feet of you, and you can see in darkness as if it were dim light within 120 feet if you.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Nephalem Skin:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">You have resistance to Radiant and Necrotic Damage.</span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'"><strong>Languages:</strong></span></span></p><p><span style="color: #242527"><span style="font-family: 'Roboto'">You can Speak, read, and write Common, Infernal and Celestial.</span></span></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Corey Simons, post: 7287240, member: 6922370"] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]I have been creating a race for a while, and would like some feedback on it. :) My DM's love the idea of it so I figured I would throw it out there. :)[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]If you like this, please thumbs up it so that I know I did well. THANK YOU! :)[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]I took quite a bit of time on this, so please don't claim this as your own. Thank you.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Nephalem[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Spawn of the cross breeding between Angel and Demon, the Nephalem is a creature of unique power. Made in the image of Human Mortals and due to their abnormal origins, the Nephalem are cast away to live among these mortals, hiding in plain sight. Rarest of all the races, Nephalem are considered to be a myth, spoken about only in the oldest of books and fabled stories. Orphaned and alone, many Nephalem do not realize their hidden potential throughout their long lives. They only believe themselves to be healthier, stronger and live longer than their counterparts due to the luck of the draw. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto] [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Superiority To Counterparts[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Brought up in the world by humans they follow their lesser, giving a helping hand when they can. Similar to Humans, the Nephalem are Physically diverse, but superior to Humans in every aspect. Due to the supernatural blood coursing through them, the Nephalem body is stronger and faster than the Humans they know so well. They can out pace them with ease and lift almost twice as much. A Nephalem can range from 6 feet to 7 feet tall on average and weigh 225 to 300 pounds consisting mostly of pure muscle. Nephalem skin shades range from nearly black to to very pale, but unlike their human counterparts, in the right lighting it is said that you can see an aura of midnight blue to blood red around them. Their hair color ranges from black to pure white; males might also sport facial hair that is sparse or thick. Nephalem reach adulthood in their early teens and often live over a century. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Nothing To Leave Behind[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Nephalem, like Humans, are extremely adaptable. Due to living around and being raised by humans, they too are ambitious people having widely varying tastes, morals, and customs similar to Humans. What sets them apart is that Nephalem are a steril race. Because of this flaw in their genes, Nephalem have the urge to leave a successful mark on the land having their names told about in story. They do not settle in place for long, constantly moving from location to location. This makes the Nephalem suited for the adventuring life so that their names can stand out in time. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Everyone Knows Your Different[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Just like the Humans who raised them, Nephalem are able to mingle with almost every race. They create friends easily in all their travels and have a natural ability to memorize almost anything they seen or heard instantly (Locations, Names, Structures, Writing, Symbols, etc). Nephalem serve as ambassadors, diplomats, magistrates, merchants and functionaries of all kinds like their lesser counterparts. Unlike the Humans, almost every race seem to know a difference in the Nephalem. A powerful feeling comes over the other races which seems to be in the benefit of the Nephalem most of the time. [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto] [/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Nephalem Traits:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Being raised by Humans, in their image, made the Nephalem extremely versatile.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Ability Score Increase[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][I]Nephalem Versatility:[/I][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]You have 4 points to spend in any ability with the maximum of 2 in any one ability.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Age:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Nephalem reach adulthood in their late teens and often live over a century.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Alignment:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Nephalem have demonic and angelic blood running through their veins, because of this a Nephalem does not have an innate tendency to choose a side in the war between good and evil, rather they sway between each extreme till their mid 20’s.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Size:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Nephalem range from 6 to 7 feet tall, weighing around 225 to 300 pounds mostly consisting of pure muscle. Regardless of your position, your size is Medium.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Speed:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Your base walking speed is 35 feet.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Nephalem Vision:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]Thanks to your Angelic and Demonic blood, you have superior vision in length as well as in the Dark and Dim Conditions. Can you see in dim light as if it were bright light within 120 feet of you, and you can see in darkness as if it were dim light within 120 feet if you.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Nephalem Skin:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]You have resistance to Radiant and Necrotic Damage.[/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto][B]Languages:[/B][/FONT][/COLOR] [COLOR=#242527][FONT=Roboto]You can Speak, read, and write Common, Infernal and Celestial.[/FONT][/COLOR] [/QUOTE]
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