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Message: <blockquote data-quote="GM Lent" data-source="post: 7448048" data-attributes="member: 6798775">Nice work; I particularly like Mystic as a  background, though I could see a case being made for the Favored Soul. A few suggestions:On Page 4 (of the PDF) in your Languages sidebar, you refer readers to an out of print 3.5e sourcebook. Since it is unlikely that everyone has access to this book, I would remove the reference.On page 6 (of the PDF) I'd take another look at your wording for the kender's Taunt ability. I feel it could be clearer. - I actually really love your take on kender overall. The Pitiable trait for afflicted kender is just so sad. Well done! You may, however, want to spend a bit of text explaining the difference between True and Afflicted kender, for readers who are not as familiar with the setting and its lore. In several places: 5e graphic standards have spell names as lowercase and italicized. In your document, spell names are capitalized and not italic.On page 9 (of the PDF) under dragonarmies, it would be more helpful to list them as "formally dissolved in AC XXX" instaed of just "actually dissolved."Again, nice work.</blockquote>