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<blockquote data-quote="sabrinathecat" data-source="post: 6093533" data-attributes="member: 89838">Having started this, I should probably put a few more thoughts down so that this might approach an actual review.My first thought is to rework this into a lvl 8-10 mod. The party is taking on an entire city/civilization. Only about 1/4 of the map is explored/explained. The rest???A couple of side view would greatly help the maps, especially the first one of the crevasse and the temple/thane.Zain-kin... Might as well be another sub-group of orcs or goblins, though I do like their group support powers.The story is good, but the mechanics need some tweeking.Alternates between 4e and demi 4e terms. &quot;Bruised&quot;? You mean &quot;Bloodied&quot;. &quot;Holy Damage&quot; great, that will never come up. Oh, you mean &quot;Radiant.&quot; Why not just say that and be done with it. It isn't like it is a copyright infringement or anything.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="sabrinathecat, post: 6093533, member: 89838"] Having started this, I should probably put a few more thoughts down so that this might approach an actual review. My first thought is to rework this into a lvl 8-10 mod. The party is taking on an entire city/civilization. Only about 1/4 of the map is explored/explained. The rest??? A couple of side view would greatly help the maps, especially the first one of the crevasse and the temple/thane. Zain-kin... Might as well be another sub-group of orcs or goblins, though I do like their group support powers. The story is good, but the mechanics need some tweeking. Alternates between 4e and demi 4e terms. "Bruised"? You mean "Bloodied". "Holy Damage" great, that will never come up. Oh, you mean "Radiant." Why not just say that and be done with it. It isn't like it is a copyright infringement or anything. [/QUOTE]

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