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<blockquote data-quote="Clay_More" data-source="post: 780748" data-attributes="member: 9813">Looks fine, have some few remarks though <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />Crypts Sense seems a little undefined. Doesn't mention what defines the crypt. And, its doesn't mention what can be done to fool the detection (polymorph? Invisibility? Etheralness?)Tremor seems afwully complex. I would prefer going with either using the Talhunds level to define range / width or ONE of the ability scores mentioned (CAR, WIS or CON). It does though have the Dwarven feeling I suppose you went after, which is a good thing. You could always replace Tremor with Summon Earth Elemental though <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

[QUOTE="Clay_More, post: 780748, member: 9813"] Looks fine, have some few remarks though :) Crypts Sense seems a little undefined. Doesn't mention what defines the crypt. And, its doesn't mention what can be done to fool the detection (polymorph? Invisibility? Etheralness?) Tremor seems afwully complex. I would prefer going with either using the Talhunds level to define range / width or ONE of the ability scores mentioned (CAR, WIS or CON). It does though have the Dwarven feeling I suppose you went after, which is a good thing. You could always replace Tremor with Summon Earth Elemental though :) [/QUOTE]

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