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Message: <blockquote data-quote="megamania" data-source="post: 2073579" data-attributes="member: 9255">I never got to send my submission in but the story was basically-two half brothers, each carrying a different Dragon mark, were forced into conflict near the end of the war.  Neither was willing to kill the other, one for the torment of it and the other wanting answers.  It opened with the "good" brother in chains being interrogated by a masked man while the team of good guys were in a ventalation duck trying to rescue him.  Hints at the "good" brother not knowing much about mom and dad were dropped before the team breaks in.  Then it becomes a chase from Eldeen to Cyre.  Chase scenes includes electric rails and sky ships, horses and even on foot.Eventually the "bad" brother would escape with something incredibly dangerous.  What is never explained and is believed to be in Cyre when the Mourning Lands are created.  The "good" brother still has made the connections that there were brothers but knows their parents had close contact.  He wishes he knew the truth.    The truth-   the "evil" brother never made it to Cyre and is alive and now a part of the Aurum where they can plot and run into each other again after the war in books 2,3 and so on.Until I sat down to do this, I figured- "This will be just like doing a StoryHour."   waaah- wrong!   I envy the professional writers whom can sit and do this.  I can't focus like that.  There goes my writing career.</blockquote>

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