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Message: <blockquote data-quote="torem13" data-source="post: 1834758" data-attributes="member: 11311">I missed that Subtle Charm is a charm enhancement. Here is the reposted spell with correction. SLEEPING CIRCLECharm Humanoid 3/Gen 2DC: 13Total MP: 5Range: Short (30 ft.)Duration: One minuteArea: 10 ft radius burstHD Threshold: 8 HDSaving Throw: Will negatesThis spell creates an area of light sleep from which creatures effected can be easily awoken, however they do not get a save after the first. Count lower HD creatures first up to the maximum. If only a single creature is targeted and has more than 5 HD add +1 on save for each HD above 5. Costs: 1 MP range, 1 MP area, 0 MP weak sleep, 3 MP subtle charm. I don't think it is extreme. A 5 MP spell is the approximate equal to a 3rd level spell. Glitterdust in the Phb is only 2 level. The Phb does state you can reveal hidden objects by coating them with chalk even though it doesn't give a hard number for the modifier. Being coated with shiny dust should drastically reduce the chances to hide. Creating a cloud of shiny gold-colored dust doesn't even break the 0 mp cost limit of 20 gp. My modification of the spell to eliminate the light part reduces it to a 3 mp spell which is still less powerful than the original 2nd level spell. My only possible problem is that MICA is a metallic crystal, so I don't know if it should be create crystal, create metal, create nature or create earth. SHIMMERDUSTCreate Metal 0/Gen 3Total MP: 3Range: Medium (150 ft.)Duration: 1 minuteArea: 10 ft. radius effectSaving Throw: N/AA cloud of golden particles covers everyone and everything in the area, outlining invisible things for the duration of the spell. All within the area are covered by the dust, which cannot be removed and continues to sparkle until it fades.Any creature covered by the dust takes a –40 penalty on Hide checks.Thanks for the critique. If I come up with more spells I will post them.</blockquote>

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