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<blockquote data-quote="Gulla" data-source="post: 4236576" data-attributes="member: 4272"><p>Hey, I stole some time and started reading. Comments for Tadk and Rodrigo.</p><p>(In Sblock, since I'm only on page 9 and better safe than sorry)</p><p></p><p>[sblock]<strong>"Report on the Viability of", TadK</strong></p><p>A nice report, but it lacks much of the dreamlike images and flow of some of your earlier efforts. I like the idea, but cannot find anything to get emotionally attached to. It lacks some life, I think. Which makes it a very good scientific report, but not so interresting reading. So maybe a successful experiment and well done style excercise, but it is just plain good to me. Not exciting.</p><p></p><p><strong>"The End of the Line", Rodrigo Istalindir</strong></p><p>Wow. That is for me the best one so far. The eternal hunt for a cure for anything treathenig our beloved ones. And it almost succeded. With a terrible price. It's an old plot, but very well done. (And for once the geniouses are nice, social and loveable instead of weird). Nice painting of the two main characters, a believeable (newr future?) world and good pacing. I really like this one.[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>I have read all up till Rodrigo's but will try to keep my comments for each match together. If anyone thinks I should rather post as soon as I get the comments written, I will do so.</p><p></p><p>Håkon</p><p>Theoretically with lots of free time tomorrow.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Gulla, post: 4236576, member: 4272"] Hey, I stole some time and started reading. Comments for Tadk and Rodrigo. (In Sblock, since I'm only on page 9 and better safe than sorry) [sblock][B]"Report on the Viability of", TadK[/B] A nice report, but it lacks much of the dreamlike images and flow of some of your earlier efforts. I like the idea, but cannot find anything to get emotionally attached to. It lacks some life, I think. Which makes it a very good scientific report, but not so interresting reading. So maybe a successful experiment and well done style excercise, but it is just plain good to me. Not exciting. [B]"The End of the Line", Rodrigo Istalindir[/B] Wow. That is for me the best one so far. The eternal hunt for a cure for anything treathenig our beloved ones. And it almost succeded. With a terrible price. It's an old plot, but very well done. (And for once the geniouses are nice, social and loveable instead of weird). Nice painting of the two main characters, a believeable (newr future?) world and good pacing. I really like this one.[/sblock] I have read all up till Rodrigo's but will try to keep my comments for each match together. If anyone thinks I should rather post as soon as I get the comments written, I will do so. Håkon Theoretically with lots of free time tomorrow. [/QUOTE]
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