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EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!
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<blockquote data-quote="Starman" data-source="post: 4237279" data-attributes="member: 7663"><p>Thanks to all three judges for the critiques, criticisms, and complements. I had a lot of fun with it. I had a lot of fun writing it and, like everyone else, was wishing I had more time with it. Just one more hour would have been great. <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/nervous.png" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":heh:" title="Nervous Laugh :heh:" data-shortname=":heh:" /></p><p></p><p>The genesis of the story started coming together fairly quickly for me. I saved all four pics on my computer and cycled through them over and over just staring at them. I started asking why the two men in the third pic were fighting and then when I went to the next picture which was of a woman, I had it. At first she was going to be a fairy herself, manipulating both men. As I started writing, though, and looking at her picture, I decided to change it so that she was just another pawn in a game. I will probably revisit the story at some point and revise it. I like the framework of it, but it had virtually no editing.</p><p></p><p>Reading the other stories has been a bit intimidating. The competition is going to be fierce. I'm looking forward to it, though.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Starman, post: 4237279, member: 7663"] Thanks to all three judges for the critiques, criticisms, and complements. I had a lot of fun with it. I had a lot of fun writing it and, like everyone else, was wishing I had more time with it. Just one more hour would have been great. :heh: The genesis of the story started coming together fairly quickly for me. I saved all four pics on my computer and cycled through them over and over just staring at them. I started asking why the two men in the third pic were fighting and then when I went to the next picture which was of a woman, I had it. At first she was going to be a fairy herself, manipulating both men. As I started writing, though, and looking at her picture, I decided to change it so that she was just another pawn in a game. I will probably revisit the story at some point and revise it. I like the framework of it, but it had virtually no editing. Reading the other stories has been a bit intimidating. The competition is going to be fierce. I'm looking forward to it, though. [/QUOTE]
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