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EN World Short Story Smackdown - FINAL: Berandor vs Piratecat - The Judgment Is In!
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<blockquote data-quote="Dlsharrock" data-source="post: 4237730" data-attributes="member: 55833"><p>Looks like everyone woke up when I went to bed! And I thought Enworld was slow yesterday.</p><p></p><p>Thankyou, esteemed judges. Commiserations Fickle, I think actually your story was stronger in terms of picture use. I think I kinda missed the point a bit in that quarter.</p><p></p><p>Yes H T Wise, I am available for Go whenever you want. I have no work this week and it's a long weekend. Moreover, my partner is going away for the weekend, which means I get to spend Saturday, Sunday and Monday with my brain. [(Hi!) Shut-up, you know nobody wants to hear from you, why do you always interrupt!]</p><p></p><p>Feedback has been very enlightening, thanks to everyone who gave me critique. </p><p></p><p>I think I made one major faux pas in CDM terms and didn't give the pictures due consideration. In fact, I don't just think it, I know it, and hang my big stupid red faced head in shame for so doing. In my defence I am feeling around in the dark a bit, being both new to CDM and Enworld, but that's not really the best excuse as I could have researched better and checked the archives for last years/previous years competitions. I guess I didn't take it seriously enough and for that I won't mind if someone comes round my house, rips my arm off and beats me with the soggy end.</p><p></p><p>However, having run roughshod over the entire basic premise, and felt the bitter sting of a slapped wrist for my wayward way-point methods, I feel very lucky to have scraped through to round 2 so now intend to give the pictures the respect they deserve, bless 'em. </p><p></p><p>I think I get it now, is what I'm trying to say in 1000 words or less. Thanks arwink and HT Wise for the clarity also. I've saved those words of wisdom and will use them as sort of churchy gospel when I compose my next story <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Dlsharrock, post: 4237730, member: 55833"] Looks like everyone woke up when I went to bed! And I thought Enworld was slow yesterday. Thankyou, esteemed judges. Commiserations Fickle, I think actually your story was stronger in terms of picture use. I think I kinda missed the point a bit in that quarter. Yes H T Wise, I am available for Go whenever you want. I have no work this week and it's a long weekend. Moreover, my partner is going away for the weekend, which means I get to spend Saturday, Sunday and Monday with my brain. [(Hi!) Shut-up, you know nobody wants to hear from you, why do you always interrupt!] Feedback has been very enlightening, thanks to everyone who gave me critique. I think I made one major faux pas in CDM terms and didn't give the pictures due consideration. In fact, I don't just think it, I know it, and hang my big stupid red faced head in shame for so doing. In my defence I am feeling around in the dark a bit, being both new to CDM and Enworld, but that's not really the best excuse as I could have researched better and checked the archives for last years/previous years competitions. I guess I didn't take it seriously enough and for that I won't mind if someone comes round my house, rips my arm off and beats me with the soggy end. However, having run roughshod over the entire basic premise, and felt the bitter sting of a slapped wrist for my wayward way-point methods, I feel very lucky to have scraped through to round 2 so now intend to give the pictures the respect they deserve, bless 'em. I think I get it now, is what I'm trying to say in 1000 words or less. Thanks arwink and HT Wise for the clarity also. I've saved those words of wisdom and will use them as sort of churchy gospel when I compose my next story :) [/QUOTE]
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