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<blockquote data-quote="Berandor" data-source="post: 4250985" data-attributes="member: 225"><p>Uhm, I guess I might have written it up there, but that's the end of the story right there.</p><p></p><p>[sblock]5,700 words, give or take. Wow. And I suspect it's quite a mess, what with the different styles and meandering themes and such. So why? WHY?</p><p></p><p>I must say my first idea for this was using the fire thingy in the sky as an incorporeal guardian trying to guide the hero (pretty much our current hero) to doing good. In researching Indian gods, however, the current story developed. And when I had written the first draft, I was basically faced with three choices.</p><p></p><p>One of them would be to concentrate more on the mythical aspect, but I didn’t feel that was a story I really wanted to tell. The second one, and the one I almost chose, was to cut down on the deva parts extensively, turning one (the hotel one) into a dialogue scene and cutting the rest almost entirely. That would have meant, however, that this story was the usual "paranormal investigator" CDM story. It would have been tight and safe. And I really didn’t want to play safe this time. So I kept the jumbled format and just edited the parts separately.[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>And now I'll read Starman’s entry. Should be quicker than him reading mine. Muhahaha!</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Berandor, post: 4250985, member: 225"] Uhm, I guess I might have written it up there, but that's the end of the story right there. [sblock]5,700 words, give or take. Wow. And I suspect it's quite a mess, what with the different styles and meandering themes and such. So why? WHY? I must say my first idea for this was using the fire thingy in the sky as an incorporeal guardian trying to guide the hero (pretty much our current hero) to doing good. In researching Indian gods, however, the current story developed. And when I had written the first draft, I was basically faced with three choices. One of them would be to concentrate more on the mythical aspect, but I didn’t feel that was a story I really wanted to tell. The second one, and the one I almost chose, was to cut down on the deva parts extensively, turning one (the hotel one) into a dialogue scene and cutting the rest almost entirely. That would have meant, however, that this story was the usual "paranormal investigator" CDM story. It would have been tight and safe. And I really didn’t want to play safe this time. So I kept the jumbled format and just edited the parts separately.[/sblock] And now I'll read Starman’s entry. Should be quicker than him reading mine. Muhahaha! [/QUOTE]
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