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<blockquote data-quote="Berandor" data-source="post: 4279627" data-attributes="member: 225"><p>DIsharrock:</p><p>[sblock]As with the other comments, this is from reading your entry just once, which I feel does this text a great disservice. I should really read it again before commenting, but it's late, and I’m sort of lazy, so I won't. <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Let me tell you I'm not really sure whether I liked what I just read. It definitely affected me, but how? I really should read it again. Perhaps tomorrow. I think I got all the pictures, but about the computer one I’m not sure. Also, at least at 1 am in the morning the style was sometimes hard to follow, and I admit I stopped in the middle of the story to do something else for a few minutes. Probably a "feature" of the lack of time.</p><p></p><p>BUT – here goes. I've read your first round entry, as well, and I love how you try to experiment with the form. I really think this contest needs you, someone who (similar to tadk) doesn't always write the same kind of story just with different images. I know it has made me considering different formats, as well, and when to try them if not here?</p><p></p><p>So let me sleep on your last entry, and maybe read it again, but no matter what comes of it, thank you for your entries so far. I hope there will be many more (though perhaps not in *this* contest, thank you very much <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f609.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" data-smilie="2"data-shortname=";)" />). Good night, and... you know.</p><p></p><p>Edit: I just read your comment. One hour? Okay, not bad.[/sblock]</p><p></p><p>(added edit)</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Berandor, post: 4279627, member: 225"] DIsharrock: [sblock]As with the other comments, this is from reading your entry just once, which I feel does this text a great disservice. I should really read it again before commenting, but it's late, and I’m sort of lazy, so I won't. :) Let me tell you I'm not really sure whether I liked what I just read. It definitely affected me, but how? I really should read it again. Perhaps tomorrow. I think I got all the pictures, but about the computer one I’m not sure. Also, at least at 1 am in the morning the style was sometimes hard to follow, and I admit I stopped in the middle of the story to do something else for a few minutes. Probably a "feature" of the lack of time. BUT – here goes. I've read your first round entry, as well, and I love how you try to experiment with the form. I really think this contest needs you, someone who (similar to tadk) doesn't always write the same kind of story just with different images. I know it has made me considering different formats, as well, and when to try them if not here? So let me sleep on your last entry, and maybe read it again, but no matter what comes of it, thank you for your entries so far. I hope there will be many more (though perhaps not in *this* contest, thank you very much ;)). Good night, and... you know. Edit: I just read your comment. One hour? Okay, not bad.[/sblock] (added edit) [/QUOTE]
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