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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Rkhet" data-source="post: 2470887" data-attributes="member: 31318">Ranger Rick: I was just checking over your char. Here's what you'll need to fix:1. TBD isn't a very fantasy-sounding name.2. You didn't pick a race.3. You should name the bonuses properly. For example, you wrote:con 14 (+2DD+5 book) 21it should be Con 14 +2 unnamed +5 inherent = 21. Makes it easier for me to read.4. You have a +1 Insight bonus to initiative (Rod of Alertness) and +1 Luck to saves (Robe of Stars). Those needs to be mentioned in your stats block (which needs to be tidied up. Use the creature entries from the SRD as a template).5. I'm not sure how you calculated your AC. It would have helped if you had broken down the bonuses. Here's what I have:10+7dex+8 armor(Bracers) +7 natural(DD) +5 natural enhancement(Amulet of NA)6. Skills: gaining Int does not retroactively grant skill points. Also, synergy bonuses are granted in blocks of +2, so you can never have +5 synergy to jump.7. No custom magic items. That means your Bracers of Armor With Trimmings needs to be rewritten.8. Your longbow: an item with a special ability needs to have at least a +1 bonus. So your bow would be:+1 Shocking Burst Composite Longbow of Distance (Str +4)+4 total. Cost = 32,800gp.9. Item costs:Carpet of Flying 10x10:60,000Rope of Climbing: 3,000Manuals: 137,50010. You didn't list your speed.11. Maximize the first HD.  You should have 414 HP.12. Since you have more than two rings, you need to specify which ones you are wearing.  I suggest having a separate "Items on the body" entry.</blockquote>

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