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Message: <blockquote data-quote="figmike" data-source="post: 3612906" data-attributes="member: 52877">[sblock=velmont]No don't bow out just for one adventure that i wasn't sure if i wanted to do in the first place.  Time of Tumult has three stories, the Invisible Manse one that you’ve done, the first appearance of the Alchemicals, and a story with Fakharu involved.  It’s a pretty fun story, and with you already attached to him, sounds like it might be one to do at some point.  Unless other people have played it.  It’s been out for a while and with only two adventures for exalted (tomb of 5 tombs, or whatever it’s called being the other one) it’s not surprising that most of us might be familiar with them on some level.[/sblock][sblock=Kalgalath]That’s a really good origin, have you played this guy before, or did you just come up with it recently?  At any rate, nice work.  Oh and as you can see, I’m wordy.  So I have no problem with long posts.A few things: The relationship between the Zenith and the Unconquered Sun:  When others exalt, the U. Sun can be pretty closed lipped, but with the Zenith he tends to be a bit wordy.To the Zenith Panther:  “You who have no father.  I am your father now.  You who shed blood and know not why.  I give you a reason.  In my anger, I turned my face from the world of men, but I shall do so no longer.  Know you are among my chosen priests.  Go, and make the world a righteous place as you know best.  Take light into darkness, and know you act with my blessing. If you read the Zenith book they all have about a small paragraph of words from the unconquered Sun, so if you wouldn’t mind adding a bit more to the what the U. Sun says to you that would be great.  It tends to be something to the effect of life has been hard/ you’ve wasted your life, now things will be better/I give you purpose.Outside of that it would be nice to give a little more description to the Dragon Blooded that attacked you, mainly the Fire Aspect, as it would seem a disappointment not to bring them back into the game.  And I want you to be able to recognize them without having to be told, it’s the guy from your past.  Maybe he has a tattoo or wears specific looking armor.  Something.And since you were a bandit leader who has a spiritual awakening, do you see yourself playing up the Zenith as leader type, or playing up the Zenith as loner monk type.  You referred to yourself as a Zenith Monk, so the answer might be already in front of me, but I still had to ask.  I guess the question I’m really looking for is; are you thinking of taking Followers as a background.  With the Dawn walking around with 100 already, I just want to know what to expect.Also start thinking a little bit (and really a little bit) about his youth.  How did he get to this point in his life.  It’ll probably never come into play, but everything helps.[/sblock]</blockquote>

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