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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Meadyaon" data-source="post: 5477976" data-attributes="member: 6671197">How would I make the description of a fallen angel below look less like the Hag Countess and more original?  As a fallen he is chaotic evil.Where can I find a good fallen template?     I was thinking he might also have the following:A) His monstrous looking segmented horns start at the in front of his hairline, to the back of his skull where they extend outward, curl, and come to a point. B) He has scorched stubs where his wings where burned off.C) long snake tail Description: He looks like an extraordinarily tall decrepit frightening looking human-like male that stands nine feet tall.  Foul black vulture wings sprout from his back.  The wings measure twenty-seven feet from wing tip to wing tip and crest a full two foot-and-a-half higher than the shoulders.  Black, glowing veins running throughout sagging skin that is mottled green and blue-violet and appears withered.  He has a wild mane of coarse silver-grey hair.  His gaunt face is hideously ugly.  The large eyes flicker with black fire.  The jagged iron teeth in his misshapen mouth are yellow in color.  The hands are large and gnarled.  Both hands have five fingers and a thumb that end in a sharp iron-like claw.</blockquote>