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<blockquote data-quote="Wolfspirit" data-source="post: 558564" data-attributes="member: 737">Some more stuff.Could you use your utility (or whatever you've used to find typoes) to see if there's an &quot;Aeotian&quot; anywhere?&nbsp; I remember seeing it somewhere, but couldn't find it later when &quot;Aeosian&quot; was a common spelling.In &quot;War of the Gods&quot;&nbsp; You should reformat the Legend Lore results from the ghoul that was responsible for the divination muddling.&nbsp; Break the individual poem lines up onto seperate lines and add a blank line after it, so that it doesn't run into the next paragraph.In Day One of the White Kingdom, there's a &quot;careÑ&quot;.&nbsp; It's supposed to be a long hyphen. (hey, it's at the point in the story when I can actually look things up!)*edit, and again* You might want to clean up Jobu's qoute in &quot;Khelarin&quot;.&nbsp; The &lt; deleted &gt;s you took out make it really hard to understand.Hmm, it seems to be a format thing on the boards too... &quot;&lt; deleted &gt; tries to go into EZ code or something. hmm&nbsp;*another edit*There are two &quot;Army Stopped&quot; links to the same story.&nbsp; This appears on both the main chapter select (the one that's got the necropede pic) and the left hand side bar... made me wonder if I'd clicked the wrong link the first time.*you guessed it* Scry in a whack:&nbsp; You should probably reformat Valendo's divination results at the top of the thing.That's all the typoes for now.&nbsp; *edit* until more stories are posted <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin&nbsp; &nbsp; :D"&nbsp; data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" />&nbsp; I just hit Interlude.Hey, stupid question, but are you planning on having a font change for the places that P-Kitty did?&nbsp; I allways thought it was a cool touch when the Gods talking stood out.Oh, thanks for putting me in the credits, even though this is the kind of stuff that's easy to me.&nbsp; Would you believe that I found a typo in Of Sound Mind the day that it came out?&nbsp; I'm still waiting to see the Exotic warhammer that Lucius Krekket uses *grins mischieviously*</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Wolfspirit, post: 558564, member: 737"] Some more stuff. Could you use your utility (or whatever you've used to find typoes) to see if there's an "Aeotian" anywhere? I remember seeing it somewhere, but couldn't find it later when "Aeosian" was a common spelling. In "War of the Gods" You should reformat the Legend Lore results from the ghoul that was responsible for the divination muddling. Break the individual poem lines up onto seperate lines and add a blank line after it, so that it doesn't run into the next paragraph. In Day One of the White Kingdom, there's a "careÑ". It's supposed to be a long hyphen. (hey, it's at the point in the story when I can actually look things up!) *edit, and again* You might want to clean up Jobu's qoute in "Khelarin". The < deleted >s you took out make it really hard to understand. Hmm, it seems to be a format thing on the boards too... "< deleted > tries to go into EZ code or something. hmm *another edit* There are two "Army Stopped" links to the same story. This appears on both the main chapter select (the one that's got the necropede pic) and the left hand side bar... made me wonder if I'd clicked the wrong link the first time. *you guessed it* Scry in a whack: You should probably reformat Valendo's divination results at the top of the thing. That's all the typoes for now. *edit* until more stories are posted :D I just hit Interlude. Hey, stupid question, but are you planning on having a font change for the places that P-Kitty did? I allways thought it was a cool touch when the Gods talking stood out. Oh, thanks for putting me in the credits, even though this is the kind of stuff that's easy to me. Would you believe that I found a typo in Of Sound Mind the day that it came out? I'm still waiting to see the Exotic warhammer that Lucius Krekket uses *grins mischieviously* [/QUOTE]

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