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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Krishnath" data-source="post: 151415" data-attributes="member: 56">Sorry, but the biggest chance to have the creatures looked over is to post future creatures in seperate posts unless they're related by a common theme. This is to reduce help reduce their cluttered appearance. But I'll look these over quickly (Concept and execution mostly.)Undervile: Intereresting concept, very detailed description, got way to many feats and deals to much damage, it is a beast so it shouldn't have any feats at all.Plaze: This creature is more of an annoyance than a threath. Very interresting...Draven: A wyvern/dragon crossbreed, I like all things draconic so, this is a sure bet, but... it should have one more feat (Dragons have 1 feat +1 for each four HD.) also the Dodge and mobility feats must be exchanged for others since the creature lacks the necessari requirements. But it clearly has possibilities...Krobold: Should be a monstrous humanoid or aberration and have the aquatic subtype, also give it the ability to breathe water. (Aquatic kobolds! yay!)Flay Wurm: very interresting concept, though I fail to see why a Mind Flayer would keep these around due to their diet... But I like the concept <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin    :D"  data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" />Later,</blockquote>