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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Khur" data-source="post: 341185" data-attributes="member: 5583">More stuff....I think I'm alone now, but just in case I'm notMore editing points:<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Eliminate columns. Please use the "Game Rule Information" format from the PHB for the layout of class info. That is, the headings: Class Skills (without the space-wasting PHB Chapter 4 reference), Class Features: Armor and Weapon Proficiency (without the space-wasting armor penalty text), followed by  a list of class features (gained simply by virtue of joining the class), and a list of "Legendary Class Title" Abilities. Alignment requirements (if any) should be listed among the requirements. Use Ex-"Legendary Class Title" to describe what happens when falling from the class. Place single spaces between sentences and punctuation. In proportional typography, double spaces become glaring gaps in text. Double spaces need only be used with fonts that have fixed character widths (like Courier). They're a holdover from the days when typewriters were used (typewriters having only fixed character widths). Format your text as Times New Roman (11 pt), flush left, ragged right. Inside of a single section, place no spaces after each paragraph, but indent all paragraphs after the first. The only exception is the "Quests" section in which you should place a single space between differing quests. Place no space between section headers and the text that follows them. Don't use bullets. Example: Quests There is only one true quest involved in becoming a juxaspect. After the character first kills one of his alternate selves, he makes the decision to hunt down others. The second kill, assuming he has enough experience points to gain a level, propels him into his first level as a juxaspect. Continuing as a juxaspect in an ongoing quest, because each level the character takes in this legendary class must include experience gained from killing at least one alternate self. The character may not advance in level until an alternate self has been slain. Allies may aid the advancing juxaspect, but he must make the killing blow himself. (indent here)The GM is encouraged to make tracking down alternate selves as difficult as she chooses. Just like the PC, these foes have friends, enemies, and items of power. Many will have taken juxaspect levels themselves, and thus be quite formidable opponents. Not all of these incarnations are of the same class, gender, or even race as the player's juxaspect. Avoid use of the word "will". Use this: "Characters travel in groups if they're wise.", instead of: "Characters will travel in groups if they're wise." Avoid noncommital words such as may, often, sometimes, and etc.</li> </ul>Two more edits:<a href="http://www.donkeyfeather.com/legendary/juxaspect_edit.doc" target="_blank">Juxaspect</a><a href="http://www.donkeyfeather.com/legendary/fmaster_edit.rtf" target="_blank">Forgemaster</a></blockquote>

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