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<blockquote data-quote="kingpaul" data-source="post: 693978" data-attributes="member: 1477">commentsAlright, here's what I found.&nbsp; I'll be honest, I was focusing on the Divine Weapon, but I did read through the entire document.&nbsp; No offense is meant by any of these comments<ul>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 3, 2nd paragraph: &quot;...such as the in the title: Ch'Tal's Hammer.&quot;&nbsp; This seems to be missing something.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 5, Divine Awareness - since Darkvision got incremented, do you think that Lowlight should as well?</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 5, Might of the Eternal is an (Ex) ability</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 5, now that Darvision is incremented, Kaob should have it at 100'</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 6, in Thunderer's stat block, a comma (,) is missing between Quiet Step and Stamina</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 7, I don't think apostate is a proper term to be using in that write-up. <a href="http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=apostate" target="_blank">This</a> is the definition that I'm used to.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 8, I like the spell.&nbsp; However, could it also be a Cleric spell, since the class that inspired the spell is divine in nature?</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p.9, Ch'Tal's stat block.&nbsp; The term &quot;Greater Deity&quot; and the domain Community are closed content of WotC, and as such, need to be removed.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 10, &quot;...force [to] stop evil and injustice.&quot;&nbsp; I think the &quot;to&quot; was missing from the sentence</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 28, 2nd paragraph.&nbsp; &quot;She was found that...&quot;, I think the &quot;was&quot; shouldn't be there</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 30.&nbsp; Nimrod keeps making reference to Ranger abilities, but does not have Ranger as a prerequisite.&nbsp; Is this intentional?&nbsp; For instance, the 1st quest mentioned makes note of Ranger levels and Favored Enemy.&nbsp; What if the character doesn't have these?&nbsp; They aren't required.</li>
<li data-xf-list-type="ul">p. 32, paragraph 1.&nbsp; &quot;...traveling ring....&quot;&nbsp; That phrase made no sense to me.</li>
</ul>That's all I found right now.&nbsp; I might find more on closer inspection.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="kingpaul, post: 693978, member: 1477"] [b]comments[/b] Alright, here's what I found. I'll be honest, I was focusing on the Divine Weapon, but I did read through the entire document. No offense is meant by any of these comments [list] [*]p. 3, 2nd paragraph: "...such as the in the title: Ch'Tal's Hammer." This seems to be missing something. [*]p. 5, Divine Awareness - since Darkvision got incremented, do you think that Lowlight should as well? [*]p. 5, Might of the Eternal is an (Ex) ability [*]p. 5, now that Darvision is incremented, Kaob should have it at 100' [*]p. 6, in Thunderer's stat block, a comma (,) is missing between Quiet Step and Stamina [*]p. 7, I don't think apostate is a proper term to be using in that write-up. [url=http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=apostate]This[/url] is the definition that I'm used to. [*]p. 8, I like the spell. However, could it also be a Cleric spell, since the class that inspired the spell is divine in nature? [*]p.9, Ch'Tal's stat block. The term "Greater Deity" and the domain Community are closed content of WotC, and as such, need to be removed. [*]p. 10, "...force [to] stop evil and injustice." I think the "to" was missing from the sentence [*]p. 28, 2nd paragraph. "She was found that...", I think the "was" shouldn't be there [*]p. 30. Nimrod keeps making reference to Ranger abilities, but does not have Ranger as a prerequisite. Is this intentional? For instance, the 1st quest mentioned makes note of Ranger levels and Favored Enemy. What if the character doesn't have these? They aren't required. [*]p. 32, paragraph 1. "...traveling ring...." That phrase made no sense to me. [/list] That's all I found right now. I might find more on closer inspection. [/QUOTE]

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