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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Drakmar" data-source="post: 199917" data-attributes="member: 1318">Ok.. I had written a in depth review of each pic.. but of course.. I had some of those log in problems and it got eaten.I think you have done some great pics.  Here is my take on what you need to do to improve.Shadows.  you need to improve you shadowing and also the shadow on the ground.. Pick a point of light and how that shades the figure.Jawbones.  In your earlier ones..you had a tendency to drop the left (her left) jaw lower than the right.. this makes the face look wrong.  Also.. you tend to put the ears to far forward and to high.Distortion.. I think you could really benifit from life drawing classes.  Many of the poses are very dynamic and really really good.. but the way they are posed would really affect how the womans breast sits.. or how the hand holding the face affects it.  If you are unsure of parts..get most of your gear off and look in a mirror.. won't help a great deal if you are a bloke.  but it will help with hands.. Hands. .your hands are really good.Ribs..in the female tiefling.. her ribcage is wrong..and this distorts her breast.. (never a good thing.. Breast are SACRED..um.. yes)I think that the female giant slayer is perfect.. all she needs is more shadowing.  especially on the ground this will help give the 3d illusion..The elven vampire's hands are gorgeous.. but her jaw is to strong.. drop the ear a little back and down and  the jaw less square.. and bingo.. insta elf.The elven rogue's dynamic pose is cool.. but the ear is to far foward and the jaw to square.. and there is something wrong in her left shoulder.  Apart from that.. I think you skecthes are way cool.  keep up the good work.</blockquote>

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