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Message: <blockquote data-quote="slingbld" data-source="post: 1444839" data-attributes="member: 13229">The system is entirely operable to YOU. That occurs often when we write. I find that happening when I write. What you need to do is step outside your work. You need to think like a person who has never had a thought to your conversion. The many people who have posted have mentioned a common thread of confusion in your writing. Part of it is in your sentence structure. Another part of it is in your presentation of the material. It is not presented in a user friendly manor. Look at any well designed game. The rules are introduced in a logical order. With the basics & introduction of new concepts first. You dive right into your body of work. There is no basic education or gradual introduction of your conversion. This leaves people confused. Before replying right away saying there is no problem. Take a moment to realy read what people have posted. The grammer & structure of your work left them confused. Clean that up. Also realy look at how you have laid your document out. A little re-organization can do wonders in getting more people to understanding your system.  If you do not put the new rules in front and in a clear and easy to understand manor, people will tend not to read through the entire document.If you have all the rules in there but have them spread out, many people will give up trying to learn your system before they've read through it all. Slingbld~</blockquote>

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