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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Ravellion" data-source="post: 1454962" data-attributes="member: 538">If this is intended to publish, I'd say you need an editor. A professional one. I charge only €0,04 per word because I haven't graduated uni yet.Your way of putting it:After the ruffian counter cultural years when the new Empires of Ghestei,Meiolu,Cruy,and Fiuellebegan their march into the history of the known material dimensions,that satisifed enough of the common physical and nurtitional needs of living beings;the accesses from alternate planes that had fallen through the cycles of demi- god and celestial prats that scorned the people,and made disasters in the natural connection of the magic bonds of their lands with those who spent their time there;began leaking their meta-psycic energies to these empires.The tales of misbeggoten strange beings,shrouded in magic scorn in the taverns.My way of putting it:After the Ruffian counter-cultural-years several new empires emerged. Going by the names of Ghestei, Meiolu, Cruy, and Fiuelle, these empires began to make themselves known in the known material dimensions that satisfied the physical and nutritional needs most living beings share. The planar acces points these empires used started to affect the people who lived near them. According to legend they started to develop into strange beings that were subject to scorn because of their magical energy.</blockquote>