Looks pretty good. A ton of work for sure! I would add some parchment background, tan or whatever the PHB uses. People seem to really like it when stuff looks similar lol.
I love the campaign details. A few pages is too much? Um. Ok. When I write up adventures for myself, I have at least that much on the Adventure Background and Adventure Synopsis sections. My players love that as well.
I will use it for my next one-shot between our current campaign, I have some 13th level evil PCs and I can incorporate it into my plotline and gameworld, thanks!
Thanks, Dragonsbane! If you end up running it, I'd love to hear (or read) your thoughts! That is a huge compliment!