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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Taboo" data-source="post: 293576" data-attributes="member: 5912">Thanks, Spider, I'm working on getting some details from the DM (who happens to be my brother).  We had the original battle awhile back and the details are a bit fuzzy. We're a couple of months past there now. I'm trying to flesh out the details right now. The location is about to be revealed, Kierwin suspects it, and it's probably time to reveal what she suspects so the readers at least know that much.Snap is a very interesting character. Watch to see a lot develop with him. Lots of character interaction developes with everyone about three chapters from now, I've actually built more into the story than we had at this point.  The DM (paulewaug, his story on the boards is Heroes of Haven and is very good, it's on our alternate game hosted by another DM) is going to post some background on Thorin and a couple other heroes, which will flesh out the story on some things I don't know much about. That will really get you interested and fill in a lot more about location and character background.Right now paulewaug and I are the only ones posting to the boards, but I'm working on the others. They're reading, but don't have time to post. I'm getting some good feedback from them, though.I guarantee the next two to three postings will pretty much answer most of your questions! I will go back and flesh out the crab battle, thanks for the ideas. You're right, because it was tougher than it sounds.I'm a faithful reader of your story hour by the way (and the ENWWC! You're a master a making an image in the reader's mind.Thanks, I really appreciate the ideas, this is all pretty new to me!</blockquote>

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