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<blockquote data-quote="jscottgaribay" data-source="post: 2840362" data-attributes="member: 40302">Thank you, Steverooo, for your feedback. My takeaways from your comments are that I need to make it clearer that these roleplayers are the traditional 18 to 22 year old college student (too early in life to be in full time jobs, considering the pursuit of a Bachelors of some type). I am trying to tell a fast-paced story and that does sometimes get in the way of strong character development. Your comments lead me to believe that I need to watch this balance more closely.I particularly appreciate the nit-pick parts about typos or fact errors in the novel. My editor, Brett Heller, is a great resource, but is merely human (until mecha robot-body upgrades are covered by HMO). I plan to release this &quot;blook&quot; as a print book about three month's after it is completed in August 2006, so these edits are quite valuable to me. Thanks again for your opinions.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="jscottgaribay, post: 2840362, member: 40302"] Thank you, Steverooo, for your feedback. My takeaways from your comments are that I need to make it clearer that these roleplayers are the traditional 18 to 22 year old college student (too early in life to be in full time jobs, considering the pursuit of a Bachelors of some type). I am trying to tell a fast-paced story and that does sometimes get in the way of strong character development. Your comments lead me to believe that I need to watch this balance more closely. I particularly appreciate the nit-pick parts about typos or fact errors in the novel. My editor, Brett Heller, is a great resource, but is merely human (until mecha robot-body upgrades are covered by HMO). I plan to release this "blook" as a print book about three month's after it is completed in August 2006, so these edits are quite valuable to me. Thanks again for your opinions. [/QUOTE]

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