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<blockquote data-quote="Sixchan" data-source="post: 558478" data-attributes="member: 9189">(3rd person's probably better)Aska approached the temple slowly.&nbsp; After all, carrying healing supplies and her mother's mace (which had been given to her as her mother put her in the Catacombs for safety) was no easy task for Aska's small build.&nbsp; As she made it to the steps, there was only one other person at the temple.&nbsp; As he budged up to let her sit down, he winced and grabbed his side.&quot;You're hurt!&quot; She said, and moved closer to inspect the wound.&nbsp; The boy moved away and shook his head.&nbsp; &quot;Don't be silly,&quot; she said in reply, &quot;I can help you, here.&quot;She reached into her pocket and took out one of the bottles marked 'pain killer'.&nbsp; Taking out a bandage, she dampened part of it with the salve, and wrapped it round the boy's side.&quot;The pain is stopping...&quot; he remarked, after some time.&nbsp; Aska smiled.&quot;What's your name?&quot; she asked.&quot;I'm Fritz.&nbsp; We saw each other, remember?&nbsp; I was trying to make friends.&nbsp; Before all this.&quot; he replied.&quot;I remember you!&nbsp; I'm Aska, Fritz!&nbsp; Nice to meet you.&quot;</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Sixchan, post: 558478, member: 9189"] (3rd person's probably better) Aska approached the temple slowly. After all, carrying healing supplies and her mother's mace (which had been given to her as her mother put her in the Catacombs for safety) was no easy task for Aska's small build. As she made it to the steps, there was only one other person at the temple. As he budged up to let her sit down, he winced and grabbed his side. "You're hurt!" She said, and moved closer to inspect the wound. The boy moved away and shook his head. "Don't be silly," she said in reply, "I can help you, here." She reached into her pocket and took out one of the bottles marked 'pain killer'. Taking out a bandage, she dampened part of it with the salve, and wrapped it round the boy's side. "The pain is stopping..." he remarked, after some time. Aska smiled. "What's your name?" she asked. "I'm Fritz. We saw each other, remember? I was trying to make friends. Before all this." he replied. "I remember you! I'm Aska, Fritz! Nice to meet you." [/QUOTE]

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