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<blockquote data-quote="Teflon Billy" data-source="post: 3007085" data-attributes="member: 264">so anyway...The next game I played was much anticipated. Fusangite, Maddman (with whom&nbsp; I've always wanted to game), Direkobold and a couple of other guys all took D20 Dwarf's latest &quot;Module in Progress&quot; for a spin. It was at 9am and was a laugh riot...though it's debatable whether it was intended to be or not.As the DM read the boxed text he kept coming across things that desperately needed editing. In one instance the word draw appeared somehting like 71 times in a single paragraph...[bq]...the drawings on the cliff wall are intended to draw the adventurers away from the draw in the shoreline. Should the players draw their weapons as they draw closer...[/bq] ...and so on<img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" />We were pretty drunk by 11am, but more than sober enough to point out that when describing a cave entrance to PC's as a &quot;Mucous and slime coated hole&quot;, it is crucial that the DM not describe the groups entrance into it as &quot;penetration&quot;&nbsp; <img src="http://www.enworld.org/forum/images/smilies/laugh.png"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lol:" title="Laughing&nbsp; &nbsp; :lol:" data-shortname=":lol:" /> An enjoyable time to be sure <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f642.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)"&nbsp; data-smilie="1"data-shortname=":)" /></blockquote>

[QUOTE="Teflon Billy, post: 3007085, member: 264"] so anyway... The next game I played was much anticipated. [b]Fusangite[/b], [b]Maddman[/b] (with whom I've always wanted to game), Direkobold and a couple of other guys all took [B]D20 Dwarf[/B]'s latest "Module in Progress" for a spin. It was at 9am and was a laugh riot...though it's debatable whether it was intended to be or not. As the DM read the boxed text he kept coming across things that [i]desperately needed editing. In one instance the word [i]draw[/i] appeared somehting like 71 times in a single paragraph... [bq]...the drawings on the cliff wall are intended to draw the adventurers away from the draw in the shoreline. Should the players draw their weapons as they draw closer...[/bq] ...and so on:) We were pretty drunk by 11am, but more than sober enough to point out that when describing a cave entrance to PC's as a "Mucous and slime coated hole", it is [i]crucial[/i] that the DM [I]not [/I]describe the groups entrance into it as "penetration" :lol: An enjoyable time to be sure :)[/i] [/QUOTE]

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