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<blockquote data-quote="hasu" data-source="post: 4389527" data-attributes="member: 67816">Hey folks,for my new adventure I needed a knight and his horse to become ghosts, and because I like the template system I came up with my own one.For a nicer and cleaner formatting please check the attached PDF file.I quite like the template, but I worry it might be too much of a challenge compared to other templates. Being insubstantial, the ghost can soak up quite some punishing even with only +6hp per level. I want to keep the insubstantiality on the other hand, since it seems to fit nicely as other ghosts in MM do have it, too.Is this too strong, what would you suggest? Maybe scaling down to +4hp per level would be a good idea. I'd also like to know your thoughts on the other template features, especially the powers.Thank you very much in advance, I hope you like my work and I appreciate any comments and criticism.Regards,hasuPS: I lacked a nice DMG-like font for the caption, perhaps someone can help me out.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [FONT=Adventure, fantasy]Ghost[/FONT]&nbsp;&nbsp;[FONT=Times New Roman, serif]Prerequisite: Beast or humanoid[/FONT]&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Ghost[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif](undead)[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Elite&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Soldier or Skirmisher [/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]XP&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Elite [/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Senses&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Darkvision[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Defenses&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +1 AC; +2 Fortitude, +4 Will[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Immune&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; disease, poison[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Resist&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; insubstantial[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Vulnerable&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; 5 radiant[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Speed&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; phasing[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Saving&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Throws +2[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Action&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Point 1[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Hit&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Points +6 per level +&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Constitution score[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [FONT=Modern, monospace]Powers[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Chilling&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Touch (minor; recharge&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [5][6])&nbsp; * Necrotic[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Level&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; +4 vs. Fortitude; 2d6 + Strength modifier necrotic damage, and the&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; target is slowed and weakened (save ends both). [/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]Phase&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Shift (immediate interrupt,&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; when hit by a melee attack; encounter)[/FONT]&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; [FONT=Arial, sans-serif]The&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; ghost shifts up to 3 squares.[/FONT]</blockquote>

[QUOTE="hasu, post: 4389527, member: 67816"] Hey folks, for my new adventure I needed a knight and his horse to become ghosts, and because I like the template system I came up with my own one. For a nicer and cleaner formatting please check the attached PDF file. I quite like the template, but I worry it might be too much of a challenge compared to other templates. Being insubstantial, the ghost can soak up quite some punishing even with only +6hp per level. I want to keep the insubstantiality on the other hand, since it seems to fit nicely as other ghosts in MM do have it, too. Is this too strong, what would you suggest? Maybe scaling down to +4hp per level would be a good idea. I'd also like to know your thoughts on the other template features, especially the powers. Thank you very much in advance, I hope you like my work and I appreciate any comments and criticism. Regards, hasu PS: I lacked a nice DMG-like font for the caption, perhaps someone can help me out. [FONT=Adventure, fantasy][SIZE=6][B]Ghost[/B][/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Times New Roman, serif][SIZE=2][B]Prerequisite:[/B] Beast or humanoid[/SIZE][/FONT] [LEFT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=2][B]Ghost[/B][/SIZE][/FONT][/LEFT] [LEFT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1](undead)[/SIZE][/FONT][/LEFT] [RIGHT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=2]Elite Soldier or Skirmisher [/SIZE][/FONT] [/RIGHT] [RIGHT][FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1]XP Elite [/SIZE][/FONT] [/RIGHT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Senses [/B]Darkvision[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Defenses[/B] +1 AC; +2 Fortitude, +4 Will[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Immune[/B] disease, poison[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Resist[/B] insubstantial[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Vulnerable [/B]5 radiant[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Speed[/B] phasing[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Saving Throws [/B]+2[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Action Point[/B] 1[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Hit Points[/B] +6 per level + Constitution score[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Modern, monospace][SIZE=1]Powers[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Chilling Touch [/B](minor; recharge [5][6]) [B]* Necrotic[/B][/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1]Level +4 vs. Fortitude; 2d6 + Strength modifier necrotic damage, and the target is slowed and weakened (save ends both). [/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1][B]Phase Shift[/B] (immediate interrupt, when hit by a melee attack; encounter)[/SIZE][/FONT] [FONT=Arial, sans-serif][SIZE=1]The ghost shifts up to 3 squares.[/SIZE][/FONT] [/QUOTE]

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