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<blockquote data-quote="seasong" data-source="post: 527066" data-attributes="member: 5137"><p>Usually, <em>mmadsen</em> starts this up, but I'm impatient <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin :D" data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" />.</p><p></p><p><strong>Ground Rules:</strong></p><p>0. Check out the <a href="http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=33639&highlight=iron" target="_blank">Holiday IRON DM thread</a> for the basics.</p><p></p><p>1. There are no time limits in the Home Game, unless two participants agree to one.</p><p></p><p>2. I shall critique every entry I can. I am harsh but fair, and unless this thread becomes <em>astoundingly</em> popular, it is unlikely that I will be overwhelmed - I read fast, I write fast, I bleed red ink like a river. Others are encouraged to critique as well, as the goal here is to sharpen our skills.</p><p></p><p>3. You may choose any ingredient list that has already been "used up". <strong>Do not use an ingredient list that is currently being competed with in the Iron DM competition.</strong> Once the competitors have finished their scenarios, you're good to go. For a helpful reference, I have compiled all of the lists I know of below.</p><p></p><p>Have at!</p><p></p><p><em>Note: I will be posting my own here as well. If anyone is willing to critique it for me, I'd be most appreciative.</em></p><p></p><p><a href="http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13851" target="_blank">Nemmerle's June 2002 IRON DM</a></p><p></p><p>Sample Ingredients List</p><p><em>Carnival</em></p><p><em>Manticore</em></p><p><em>Crystal Hypnosis Ball</em></p><p><em>Stirges</em></p><p><em>Con Games</em></p><p><em>Giant Snakes</em></p><p></p><p>1st Ingredients List</p><p><em>Bones</em></p><p><em>Earth Elemental</em></p><p><em>Ghouls</em></p><p><em>Magic Key</em></p><p><em>Kuo-toa</em></p><p><em>Holy Ground</em></p><p></p><p>2nd Ingredients List</p><p><em>Paladin's holy mount</em></p><p><em>Gargantuan fire beetle</em></p><p><em>Crippled rogue</em></p><p><em>Flooded mine</em></p><p><em>Diary</em></p><p><em>Intelligent Greatsword</em></p><p></p><p>3rd Ingredients List</p><p><em>Amnesia</em></p><p><em>Island Fortress</em></p><p><em>Evil Monks</em></p><p><em>Eggs</em></p><p><em>Hangman Tree</em></p><p><em>Cursed Spear, Back-biter</em></p><p></p><p>4th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Sundial</em></p><p><em>Were-bear</em></p><p><em>Drider</em></p><p><em>Ring of Elemental Command</em></p><p><em>Triptych</em></p><p><em>Butler</em></p><p></p><p>5th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Beggars</em></p><p><em>Corrupt Fire Priest</em></p><p><em>Defiled Graves</em></p><p><em>Penitent Undead</em></p><p><em>Sacred Plants</em></p><p><em>Tainted Blood</em></p><p></p><p>6th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Oval Door</em></p><p><em>Permanent Image</em></p><p><em>Quicklings</em></p><p><em>Female Hill Giant</em></p><p><em>Staff of Thunder & Lightning</em></p><p><em>False Beard Made from Dwarf Hair</em></p><p></p><p>7th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Tea Party</em></p><p><em>Opium</em></p><p><em>Talking Mouse</em></p><p><em>Murlynd's Spoon</em></p><p><em>Pixies</em></p><p><em>Dire Bear</em></p><p></p><p><a href="http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=28400&highlight=iron" target="_blank">incognito's October 2002 IRON DM</a></p><p>1st Ingredients List</p><p><em>Mountains</em></p><p><em>Unable to be flanked</em></p><p><em>Teleport</em></p><p><em>Ravid</em></p><p><em>Cold Slaves</em></p><p><em>Ghost touched spiked gauntlet</em></p><p></p><p>2nd Ingredients List</p><p><em>Mushrooms</em></p><p><em>Dryad</em></p><p><em>Hand carved pipe</em></p><p><em>Underground lake</em></p><p><em>a conflict of interest</em></p><p><em>Awakened dove - with levels of Ranger</em></p><p></p><p>3rd Ingredients List</p><p><em>Wraith w/levels of Bard</em></p><p><em>Magic ring of irony</em></p><p><em>A large city</em></p><p><em>Tasty pudding </em></p><p><em>The Tree of Knowledge</em></p><p><em>Barbarian rage</em></p><p></p><p>4th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Fine sand</em></p><p><em>Shadow Dragon or Shadow Dagon</em></p><p><em>A dead God</em></p><p><em>Unusual coins</em></p><p><em>Githzerai Monk</em></p><p><em>Maintaining balance</em></p><p></p><p>5th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Throne of human fat</em></p><p><em>Rousing music</em></p><p><em>Fragile mechanical clock</em></p><p><em>Salamander couriers</em></p><p><em>Betrayal</em></p><p><em>1/2 Fiend Xorn</em></p><p></p><p>6th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Water table</em></p><p><em>Gibbous moon</em></p><p><em>A noble sacrifice</em></p><p><em>Autumn</em></p><p><em>Elite kobold knights</em></p><p><em>Medallion of thoughts</em></p><p></p><p>7th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Miniature keep</em></p><p><em>Potion of Glibness</em></p><p><em>Champion ogre fighters</em></p><p><em>Nostalgia</em></p><p><em>Tome of Hushed Rumors</em></p><p><em>Mindless Tentacle</em></p><p></p><p>8th Ingredients List</p><p><em>Military coup</em></p><p><em>Priest's sister</em></p><p><em>Animated violin</em></p><p><em>Death Slaad</em></p><p><em>Level playing field</em></p><p><em>Brilliant energy falcion</em></p><p>(and optional ingredients for bonus points/penalties)</p><p><em>Spell Mastery</em></p><p><em>Omlette</em></p><p><em>Worried gnomes</em></p><p><em>Misleading Map</em></p><p><em>Quench</em></p><p><em>Analogy</em></p><p></p><p><a href="http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=33639&highlight=iron" target="_blank">nemmerle's December 2002 tournament</a></p><p></p><p>1st Ingredient List</p><p><em>Wedding gift</em></p><p><em>Evil grandmother</em></p><p><em>River Spirit</em></p><p><em>Lonely Treant</em></p><p><em>Clock Tower</em></p><p><em>Ring of Sustenance</em></p><p></p><p>2nd Ingredient List</p><p><em>Awakened Rabbit</em></p><p><em>Rod of Wonder</em></p><p><em>Briar Patch</em></p><p><em>Half-Fiend Children</em></p><p><em>Ankhegs</em></p><p><em>Barrel of Mead</em></p><p></p><p>3rd Ingredient List (TOURNAMENT NOT FINISHED - DO NOT USE)</p><p><em>Angry Halflings</em></p><p><em>Kazoos</em></p><p><em>Cavalry</em></p><p><em>Wishing Well</em></p><p><em>Hat of Disguise</em></p><p><em>Hydra</em></p><p></p><p>4th Ingredient List (TOURNAMENT NOT FINISHED - DO NOT USE)</p><p><em>Dwarven Bandits</em></p><p><em>Women’s Clothing</em></p><p><em>Scroll of Miracle</em></p><p><em>Simulacrum</em></p><p><em>Naga</em></p><p><em>Ancient Monk</em></p><p></p><p><strong>OTHERS</strong></p><p></p><p>HellHound's Ingredient List</p><p><em>Gnome Barbarians</em></p><p><em>Telekinesis</em></p><p><em>Seven Flowers</em></p><p><em>Dire Template</em></p><p><em>Ancient Crypt</em></p><p><em>Mercy of the SlaveMaster</em></p><p></p><p>Creamsteak's Ingredient List</p><p><em>Action: Lock-picking</em></p><p><em>Item: A normal samurai sword</em></p><p><em>Creature: A single hamster</em></p><p><em>Place: Graveyard</em></p><p><em>Random: Sacred Tortoise</em></p><p><em>Random: Grandfather</em></p><p></p><p>evileeyore's Ingredients List</p><p><em>Angry Mob</em></p><p><em>Costume Jewelry</em></p><p><em>Alchemist’s Fire</em></p><p><em>Silver Dragon</em></p><p><em>Foppish Vampire Bard</em></p><p><em>Apparatus of Kwalish</em></p><p></p><p>Hypersmurf's Ingredients List</p><p><em>Nystul's Undetectable Aura</em></p><p><em>Windmill</em></p><p><em>Sovereign Glue</em></p><p><em>Gelatinous Cube</em></p><p><em>Pathological Liar</em></p><p><em>Thunderstorm</em></p><p></p><p>Pielorinho's Logo Ingredient's List</p><p><em>Rod of Seven Parts</em></p><p><em>Walrus tusk</em></p><p><em>Mime</em></p><p><em>Bugbear wererat</em></p><p><em>Torn tapestry</em></p><p><em>Dire Flaming Flail Snail</em></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="seasong, post: 527066, member: 5137"] Usually, [i]mmadsen[/i] starts this up, but I'm impatient :D. [b]Ground Rules:[/b] 0. Check out the [URL=http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=33639&highlight=iron]Holiday IRON DM thread[/URL] for the basics. 1. There are no time limits in the Home Game, unless two participants agree to one. 2. I shall critique every entry I can. I am harsh but fair, and unless this thread becomes [i]astoundingly[/i] popular, it is unlikely that I will be overwhelmed - I read fast, I write fast, I bleed red ink like a river. Others are encouraged to critique as well, as the goal here is to sharpen our skills. 3. You may choose any ingredient list that has already been "used up". [b]Do not use an ingredient list that is currently being competed with in the Iron DM competition.[/b] Once the competitors have finished their scenarios, you're good to go. For a helpful reference, I have compiled all of the lists I know of below. Have at! [i]Note: I will be posting my own here as well. If anyone is willing to critique it for me, I'd be most appreciative.[/i] [URL=http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13851]Nemmerle's June 2002 IRON DM[/URL] Sample Ingredients List [i]Carnival[/i] [i]Manticore[/i] [i]Crystal Hypnosis Ball[/i] [i]Stirges[/i] [i]Con Games[/i] [i]Giant Snakes[/i] 1st Ingredients List [i]Bones[/i] [i]Earth Elemental[/i] [i]Ghouls[/i] [i]Magic Key[/i] [i]Kuo-toa[/i] [i]Holy Ground[/i] 2nd Ingredients List [i]Paladin's holy mount[/i] [i]Gargantuan fire beetle[/i] [i]Crippled rogue[/i] [i]Flooded mine[/i] [i]Diary[/i] [i]Intelligent Greatsword[/i] 3rd Ingredients List [i]Amnesia[/i] [i]Island Fortress[/i] [i]Evil Monks[/i] [i]Eggs[/i] [i]Hangman Tree[/i] [i]Cursed Spear, Back-biter[/i] 4th Ingredients List [i]Sundial[/i] [i]Were-bear[/i] [i]Drider[/i] [i]Ring of Elemental Command[/i] [i]Triptych[/i] [i]Butler[/i] 5th Ingredients List [i]Beggars[/i] [i]Corrupt Fire Priest[/i] [i]Defiled Graves[/i] [i]Penitent Undead[/i] [i]Sacred Plants[/i] [i]Tainted Blood[/i] 6th Ingredients List [i]Oval Door[/i] [i]Permanent Image[/i] [i]Quicklings[/i] [i]Female Hill Giant[/i] [i]Staff of Thunder & Lightning[/i] [i]False Beard Made from Dwarf Hair[/i] 7th Ingredients List [i]Tea Party[/i] [i]Opium[/i] [i]Talking Mouse[/i] [i]Murlynd's Spoon[/i] [i]Pixies[/i] [i]Dire Bear[/i] [URL=http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=28400&highlight=iron]incognito's October 2002 IRON DM[/URL] 1st Ingredients List [i]Mountains[/i] [i]Unable to be flanked[/i] [i]Teleport[/i] [i]Ravid[/i] [i]Cold Slaves[/i] [i]Ghost touched spiked gauntlet[/i] 2nd Ingredients List [i]Mushrooms[/i] [i]Dryad[/i] [i]Hand carved pipe[/i] [i]Underground lake[/i] [i]a conflict of interest[/i] [i]Awakened dove - with levels of Ranger[/i] 3rd Ingredients List [i]Wraith w/levels of Bard[/i] [i]Magic ring of irony[/i] [i]A large city[/i] [i]Tasty pudding [/i] [i]The Tree of Knowledge[/i] [i]Barbarian rage[/i] 4th Ingredients List [i]Fine sand[/i] [i]Shadow Dragon or Shadow Dagon[/i] [i]A dead God[/i] [i]Unusual coins[/i] [i]Githzerai Monk[/i] [i]Maintaining balance[/i] 5th Ingredients List [i]Throne of human fat[/i] [i]Rousing music[/i] [i]Fragile mechanical clock[/i] [i]Salamander couriers[/i] [i]Betrayal[/i] [i]1/2 Fiend Xorn[/i] 6th Ingredients List [i]Water table[/i] [i]Gibbous moon[/i] [i]A noble sacrifice[/i] [i]Autumn[/i] [i]Elite kobold knights[/i] [i]Medallion of thoughts[/i] 7th Ingredients List [i]Miniature keep[/i] [i]Potion of Glibness[/i] [i]Champion ogre fighters[/i] [i]Nostalgia[/i] [i]Tome of Hushed Rumors[/i] [i]Mindless Tentacle[/i] 8th Ingredients List [i]Military coup[/i] [i]Priest's sister[/i] [i]Animated violin[/i] [i]Death Slaad[/i] [i]Level playing field[/i] [i]Brilliant energy falcion[/i] (and optional ingredients for bonus points/penalties) [i]Spell Mastery[/i] [i]Omlette[/i] [i]Worried gnomes[/i] [i]Misleading Map[/i] [i]Quench[/i] [i]Analogy[/i] [URL=http://enworld.cyberstreet.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=33639&highlight=iron]nemmerle's December 2002 tournament[/URL] 1st Ingredient List [i]Wedding gift Evil grandmother River Spirit Lonely Treant Clock Tower Ring of Sustenance[/i] 2nd Ingredient List [i]Awakened Rabbit Rod of Wonder Briar Patch Half-Fiend Children Ankhegs Barrel of Mead[/i] 3rd Ingredient List (TOURNAMENT NOT FINISHED - DO NOT USE) [i]Angry Halflings Kazoos Cavalry Wishing Well Hat of Disguise Hydra[/i] 4th Ingredient List (TOURNAMENT NOT FINISHED - DO NOT USE) [i]Dwarven Bandits Women’s Clothing Scroll of Miracle Simulacrum Naga Ancient Monk[/i] [b]OTHERS[/b] HellHound's Ingredient List [i]Gnome Barbarians[/i] [i]Telekinesis[/i] [i]Seven Flowers[/i] [i]Dire Template[/i] [i]Ancient Crypt[/i] [i]Mercy of the SlaveMaster[/i] Creamsteak's Ingredient List [i]Action: Lock-picking[/i] [i]Item: A normal samurai sword[/i] [i]Creature: A single hamster[/i] [i]Place: Graveyard[/i] [i]Random: Sacred Tortoise[/i] [i]Random: Grandfather[/i] evileeyore's Ingredients List [i]Angry Mob[/i] [i]Costume Jewelry[/i] [i]Alchemist’s Fire[/i] [i]Silver Dragon[/i] [i]Foppish Vampire Bard[/i] [i]Apparatus of Kwalish[/i] Hypersmurf's Ingredients List [i]Nystul's Undetectable Aura[/i] [i]Windmill[/i] [i]Sovereign Glue[/i] [i]Gelatinous Cube[/i] [i]Pathological Liar[/i] [i]Thunderstorm[/i] Pielorinho's Logo Ingredient's List [i]Rod of Seven Parts[/i] [i]Walrus tusk[/i] [i]Mime[/i] [i]Bugbear wererat[/i] [i]Torn tapestry[/i] [i]Dire Flaming Flail Snail[/i] [/QUOTE]
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