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<blockquote data-quote="HRSegovia" data-source="post: 6228488" data-attributes="member: 99950"><p>I wrote a movie script (which went nowhere, of course), but I'm rather proud of it. Mankind returns to Earth and finds he must take it back from new inhabitants. I figured, as a post release prequel, an anime series based on the Earth survivors left behind (while much of mankind was gone) would be a great setting for BESM.</p><p></p><p></p><p>[sblock]</p><p>DES1E1: Aurorenia and the Stigmata</p><p></p><p> FADE IN</p><p></p><p> GRASSY FIELD - NIGHT</p><p></p><p> A metallic-like star hovers far in the night sky. Two teens</p><p> lay on the ground.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> Wow... it's so far away now.</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> Enjoy it while you can.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> What's it like up there?</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> Who cares?</p><p></p><p> The boy sits up. The girl is still staring at the stars.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> I do.</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> (rhetorically)</p><p> Do you think they're actually</p><p> looking down here hoping to come</p><p> back?</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> Maybe.</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> We're dead to them. -- They're</p><p> happy up there. They're not lonely.</p><p> They're Safe.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> But the plague's gone.</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> They don't know that... and neither</p><p> do we.</p><p></p><p> The girl lays her head to the side and stares at the woods in</p><p> the distance.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> How long has it been?</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> About an hour.</p><p></p><p> The boy searches the horizon.</p><p></p><p> The girl sits up.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> See him?</p><p></p><p> Concentrating on the horizon, the boy simply gives a negative</p><p> nod.</p><p></p><p> GIRL (CONT'D)</p><p> Do you think he found anybody else?</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> Maybe. -- Wait, there he is!</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> MAN RUNNING</p><p></p><p> Panting and wheezing, a well built man with a beard sprints</p><p> as he occasionally glances back in fear.</p><p></p><p> BOY (O.S.)</p><p> (distant)</p><p> Hi, Dad!</p><p></p><p> GIRL (O.S.)</p><p> (distant, overlapping)</p><p> Daddy!</p><p></p><p> The man gets a concerned look on his face.</p><p></p><p> MAN</p><p> Get inside, now!</p><p></p><p> The kids continue their greetings.</p><p></p><p> MAN (CONT'D)</p><p> For God's sake, get back in the</p><p> shelter!</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> THE TEENS</p><p></p><p> They pause and look at their father in confusion. As the man</p><p> approaches, several vicious creatures (each different in</p><p> their own design) rapidly persue him. The children look at</p><p> each other and run for a horizontal, bunker-like door.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> What are they?!</p><p></p><p> BOY</p><p> I don't know!</p><p></p><p> The girl descends into the opening.</p><p></p><p> The boy stops and glances back for his father.</p><p></p><p> BOY (CONT'D)</p><p> Hurry, Dad!</p><p></p><p> He begins to cry and runs down the opening.</p><p></p><p> INT. SHELTER</p><p></p><p> It's dark and damp. The two kids stand in the moonlight that</p><p> shines in. Both of them cry as they glare out the opening,</p><p> waiting for their father.</p><p></p><p> MAN (O.S.)</p><p> You're gonna have to run faster</p><p> then that to catch --</p><p></p><p> A gruesome growl is followed by a squishy puncture sound.</p><p> Silence.</p><p></p><p> GIRL</p><p> (softly)</p><p> Daddy?</p><p></p><p> The kids continue to stare, waiting for a response.</p><p></p><p> With shocking speed, they briefly see their father reach the</p><p> opening, but he is jerked back by monstrous hands. Blood</p><p> sprays into the room and the door slams shut.</p><p></p><p> BLACKOUT</p><p></p><p> BEDROOM - NIGHT</p><p></p><p> A gorgeous woman, about the age of 18 wakes up and catches</p><p> her self screaming.</p><p></p><p> WOMAN</p><p> Daddy! --</p><p></p><p> She closes her eyes and puts her hand to her face. With her</p><p> other hand, she throws the blanket off of her and reveals her</p><p> nudity.</p><p></p><p> She turns to stand from her bed and reveals that her back is</p><p> covered with scars from whiplashes.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> KITCHEN</p><p></p><p> She enters the room fully clothed and puts on a jacket. She</p><p> makes no attempt to lighten the room. Instead, she looks out</p><p> of the window. The sun is beginning to come up.</p><p></p><p> COTTAGE - DAY</p><p></p><p> Barely lit by the dark-blue sky, a tiny shimmer emanates from</p><p> the hilt of her sword as she steps out and stretches. Mid</p><p> stretch, she pauses and sniffs.</p><p></p><p> Her face turns to sudden awareness. She leans swiftly to her</p><p> right, twisting her body and barely dodges the tip of an</p><p> arrow, arms flailing for balance.</p><p></p><p> A short, stalky figure emerges from the shadows. A gray beard</p><p> is visible through the shadow of his wide-brim hat.</p><p></p><p> WOMAN</p><p> Dammit JOAQUIN!</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> You lost your balance.</p><p> (sighs)</p><p> FATIMA... you're slacking.</p><p></p><p> Joaquin turns and begins to walk away.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> That was a high speed sharp stick.</p><p> Whad'ya expect, QUINO!?</p><p></p><p> He stops.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> More.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Christ! I can't bel --</p><p></p><p> Joaquin turns and shoots Fatima a sharp look.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Watch your language, Hunter!</p><p> Remember who you serve!</p><p></p><p> Fatima stands in shock at Joaquin's sudden shouting. Joaquin</p><p> calms.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> (CONT'D)</p><p> I'm sorry. It's just --</p><p></p><p> A twig breaks in the distance. Both of them pause, listen,</p><p> and watch. Fatima reaches for her sword. Joaquin stops her.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN (CONT'D)</p><p> (stern whisper)</p><p> No.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> (whisper)</p><p> What?</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> You're not ready.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> (slightly louder)</p><p> It's not the first --</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> (matching her volume)</p><p> Are you ever gonna stop questioning</p><p> me?</p><p></p><p> They hear another snap. From the tall brush, a bluish, three</p><p> eyed beast emerges.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN (CONT'D)</p><p> Okay, time to run.</p><p></p><p> Fatima draws her sword.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> You know what? --</p><p></p><p> Three more creatures, each different and just as mean</p><p> looking, emerge as well.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> You're questioning again.</p><p></p><p> The creatures charge.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> You're right, run.</p><p></p><p> Fatima and Quino run in the opposite direction into the tall</p><p> grass.</p><p></p><p> The dodge their way through the forest of weeds.</p><p></p><p> The demons are close behind.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. TULIAVILLE</p><p></p><p> Fatima and Quino climb steps through a wooden archway. They</p><p> are soaked with water.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> What were you thinking?</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> We're alive, right?</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> If you call cutting a bridge and</p><p> falling four-hundred feet into a</p><p> river "alive"? Then yeah, we're</p><p> alive.</p><p></p><p> A man in hunter clothing stands at the top.</p><p></p><p> HUNTER</p><p> State your business.</p><p></p><p> Quino and Fatima stop in their tracks, noticing the man.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Oh! Dear. My apologies. We're</p><p> traveling through and need lodging.</p><p></p><p> HUNTER</p><p> One night. Be quick with your</p><p> business. These townspeople aren't</p><p> fond of strangers.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> INT. SPEARED HEDGEHOG INN & TAVERN</p><p></p><p> Quino and Fatima sit at a table with plates in front of them. </p><p> The plates have pieces of meat skewered on hedgehog quills.</p><p></p><p> The place is full, but conversation is minimal. Most seem to</p><p> be watching the visitors.</p><p></p><p> FLASHBACK</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> INT. MAYPOLE INN</p><p></p><p> Fatima sits at a table. Suddenly, with a loud crack, Fatima</p><p> screams in pain. Her white shirt is stained with blood along</p><p> her back.</p><p></p><p> The crowd watches in amazement as more cracks are heard and</p><p> more blood appears on her back.</p><p></p><p> Nobody is striking her.</p><p></p><p> BACK TO SCENE</p><p></p><p> Fatima flinches.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> You okay?</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> What am I, Quino?</p><p></p><p> Quino looks around.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Shhh! You don't want these people</p><p> to hear. They don't like hunters.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Aren't these the people I'm trying</p><p> to save?</p><p></p><p> Quino closes his eyes and sighs.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Yes. But they fear change. These</p><p> are hard times, and all they know</p><p> is trouble follows people like you. </p><p> They are already suffering.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> People like me? What kind of</p><p> cryptic crap is this? I'm tired of</p><p> the games!</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Fatima. You have the stigmata. </p><p> You've been chosen by God.</p><p></p><p> Fatima slams her fist on the table.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> I don't even believe!</p><p></p><p> Onlookers worry. A bouncer exits from behind the bar and</p><p> heads towards the table.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Those things are real. Aren't</p><p> they? And so are the marks on your</p><p> back. And your new powers.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Why me, huh?</p><p></p><p> The bouncer arrives at the table.</p><p></p><p> BOUNCER</p><p> I'm gonna have to ask you to leave.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> We're not done with our meals.</p><p></p><p> The bouncer grabs the plates and turns them upside-down on</p><p> the table.</p><p></p><p> BOUNCER</p><p> Now you are.</p><p></p><p> Fatima stands.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Fatima, no!</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Listen --</p><p></p><p> The bouncer puts his hand on her shoulder firmly.</p><p></p><p> BOUNCER</p><p> No! You listen!</p><p></p><p> Fatima grabs his hand and places her other on his elbow,</p><p> locking his arm and slamming his head onto the table,</p><p> pressing his face into the food.</p><p></p><p> The bouncer grunts and The crowd stands in opposition.</p><p></p><p> A woman screams from outside.</p><p></p><p> SCREAMING WOMAN (O.S.)</p><p> They're here! Demons!</p><p></p><p> An onlooker walks by Fatima and points at her.</p><p></p><p> ONLOOKER</p><p> This is your fault!</p><p></p><p> He runs outside. Others follow.</p><p></p><p> Fatima lets the bouncer go. He collapses to the floor.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Time to get to work.</p><p></p><p> Fatima draws her sword.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> I'm ready.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> No you're not.</p><p></p><p> Fatima looks at Quino.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN (CONT'D)</p><p> But we don't have a choice now, do</p><p> we?</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. TULIAVILLE</p><p></p><p> A giant woman with a snake body and eight arms torments the</p><p> town.</p><p></p><p> TOWNSMAN</p><p> It's Aurorenia!</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> The serpent queen. -- Die!</p><p></p><p> Fatima charges with her sword.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia screams and several smaller demons fly from her</p><p> mouth toward Fatima.</p><p></p><p> Fatima slices through them like jungle vines.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia swipes her giant tail through the town, wiping away</p><p> fifteen townsfolk and smashing into a shop.</p><p></p><p> Fatima leaps into the air.</p><p></p><p> She manages to slice off an arm, but Aurorenia slaps her away</p><p> with another.</p><p></p><p> Fatima slams into a wall.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia spits more demons at Fatima.</p><p></p><p> Joaquin draws an arrow and fires.</p><p></p><p> The arrow cuts through the air and pierces Aurorenia's skull.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia flings her head back in pain, then recovers and</p><p> breaks the arrow off.</p><p></p><p> Fatima fights-off the smaller demons.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> We can't kill her!</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> There's got to be a way! -- There's</p><p> always a way!</p><p></p><p> Quino draws another arrow and fires it.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia is about to spit more demons, but the arrow pierces</p><p> her mouth, sealing it shut.</p><p></p><p> She throws her tail around in pain causing more destruction.</p><p></p><p> Fatima finishes the smaller demons. She begins to charge</p><p> Aurorenia, but flinches in pain and falls to the ground.</p><p></p><p> FLASHBACK</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> INT. MAYPOLE INN</p><p></p><p> Fatima sits at a table. Suddenly, with a loud crack, Fatima</p><p> screams in pain. Her white shirt is stained with blood along</p><p> her back.</p><p></p><p> VOICE (V.O.)</p><p> I grant thee the power of Holy</p><p> Vengeance.</p><p></p><p> The crowd watches in amazement as more cracks are heard and</p><p> more blood appears on her back.</p><p></p><p> Nobody is striking her.</p><p></p><p> BACK TO SCENE</p><p></p><p> Fatima recovers and looks at Aurorenia intently.</p><p></p><p> She stands and walks towards Aurorenia.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia makes another swipe with her tail. Fatima leaps</p><p> over it as it slams into another building, shattering it to</p><p> splinters.</p><p></p><p> Fatima stops and raises her right hand and closes her eyes.</p><p></p><p> A giant, blue, spinning cross appears in her open palm.</p><p></p><p> The scars on her back begin to bleed.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Holy --</p><p></p><p> She throws her hand forward, flinging the cross like a giant</p><p> boomerang at Aurorenia.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (CONT'D)</p><p> -- Avenger!</p><p></p><p> The cross spins and spirals toward Aurorenia.</p><p></p><p> It impales her and explodes into a blue sphere of light.</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia screams as she disintegrates.</p><p></p><p> The dust settles and the townsfolk emerge. They look around.</p><p></p><p> The bouncer shows up behind Fatima. He looks concerned as he</p><p> glares around at the townsfolk.</p><p></p><p> BOUNCER</p><p> You should leave.</p><p></p><p> The townsfolk look at Fatima.</p><p></p><p> TOWNSMAN 2</p><p> This is your fault!</p><p></p><p> BOUNCER</p><p> Quickly.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> She saved you!</p><p></p><p> A stone hits Quino on the head.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> You ungrateful --</p><p></p><p> More stones fly.</p><p></p><p> BOUNCER</p><p> Now!</p><p></p><p> The bouncer gets in the way of the stones to provide cover</p><p> for Fatima and Quino.</p><p></p><p> Fatima and Quino run.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. WOODS</p><p></p><p> Quino and Fatima are on foot.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> I need to rest.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> It seems safe.</p><p></p><p> Fatima plops her butt down near a tree.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> So what was the question?</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> What would you wish for if you</p><p> found a genie in a bottle?</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> I don't know.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> It's different when money isn't a</p><p> factor anymore, huh?</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> What would you wish for?</p><p></p><p> A young male voice resounds.</p><p></p><p> VOICE (O.S.)</p><p> I'd rather find a message in a</p><p> bottle than a genie.</p><p></p><p> Fatima jumps up. A teenage boy leans on the tree at which</p><p> Fatima sat. He is dressed in a monk's robe.</p><p></p><p> TEENAGE BOY</p><p> I don't want to play God, just hear</p><p> him.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Who are you?</p><p></p><p> The boy walks toward Fatima.</p><p></p><p> TEENAGE BOY</p><p> My name's Jacopo. I live here.</p><p></p><p> Quino looks around.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> In the woods?</p><p></p><p> JACOPO</p><p> There's a monastery nearby. Where</p><p> are you headed?</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Everywhere... and nowhere.</p><p></p><p> JACOPO</p><p> I thought only my teacher talked in</p><p> riddles.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> We've just started. We're</p><p> searching for answers --</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> -- and demons.</p><p></p><p> Jacopo motions to Fatima and Quino.</p><p></p><p> JACOPO</p><p> You've come to the right place. --</p><p> C'mon.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> INT. MONASTERY</p><p></p><p> Several monks and the party sit in a circle on the floor.</p><p></p><p> MONK 1</p><p> These are the end times, and we are</p><p> in judgement.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> So these really are demons.</p><p></p><p> The monk looks at Fatima.</p><p></p><p> MONK 1</p><p> And you really do have the</p><p> stigmata.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> And I'm really gonna die.</p><p></p><p> The monk opens his palms. He has circular scars on his</p><p> wrists.</p><p></p><p> MONK 1</p><p> With the end comes eternal life for</p><p> those who are saved.</p><p></p><p> JACOPO</p><p> But who will be saved, master?</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Those who are saved are already</p><p> gone. Of those of us left, only</p><p> the redeemed will go to Heaven.</p><p></p><p> Quino looks around.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> But monks --</p><p></p><p> MONK 1</p><p> -- are only human. -- It will be</p><p> far, but you will find the path to</p><p> your redemption in Russia. There</p><p> you will begin your journey to your</p><p> final destination. It will be long</p><p> and treacherous, but it is your</p><p> lot. Remember your place as a</p><p> hunter along the way.</p><p></p><p> Fatima crosses her arms and scoffs.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Why should I?</p><p></p><p> MONK 1</p><p> Because you know he's real. And</p><p> you know the alternative.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Damned if I do; Damned if I don't.</p><p></p><p> MONK 1</p><p> Only if you don't. -- You can sleep</p><p> here tonight. You journey in the</p><p> morning.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> BEDROOM</p><p></p><p> Fatima is asleep in bed. She wakes to the sound of a grunt.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> HALLWAY</p><p></p><p> She follows the grunts down the hallway as they become yelps. </p><p> She reaches a spiral stairwell.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> STAIRS</p><p></p><p> The yelps become screams.</p><p></p><p> At the bottom of the stairway is light. A shadow is cast on</p><p> the wall of a monk as he flails around in pain.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> CATACOMBS</p><p></p><p> She reaches the bottom of the stairs and finds Monk 1</p><p> flailing in pain.</p><p></p><p> A spray of blood splashes on her face as the monk swings his</p><p> arm. His wounds have reopened and his face is covered in</p><p> blood.</p><p></p><p> He gurgles blood as an invisible spear pierces his lung.</p><p></p><p> The monk collapses in a pool of his blood.</p><p></p><p> Fatima looks around. There are other monks in the room. </p><p> Tears well up in her eyes.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> (top of her lungs)</p><p> And you didn't help him!</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> There was nothing we could do but</p><p> pray for his soul.</p><p></p><p> Fatima cries and gasps for air as she looks at him and feels</p><p> her body.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> Yes. Your fate is the same.</p><p></p><p> She shakes her head "no".</p><p></p><p> Quino shows up behind her.</p><p></p><p> She turns around, falls to her knees and holds him.</p><p></p><p> MONK 3</p><p> They will be attracted by this. </p><p> You should go.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> What will you do?</p><p></p><p> MONK 3</p><p> Fight them.</p><p></p><p> JOAQUIN</p><p> Can you?</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> We don't have a choice.</p><p></p><p> Fatima sniffles as she stands.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Yes you do. -- We'll stay.</p><p></p><p> The monks nod in acknowledgement.</p><p></p><p> MONK 3</p><p> Let's bury our brother before they</p><p> arrive.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. MONASTERY - GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> Twenty monks crowd an open grave.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> In sure and certain hope of the</p><p> resurrection to eternal life --</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> WOODS</p><p></p><p> Several different demons rush through he forest as they</p><p> grunt, heave, and drool.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> Fatima turns to the woods and watches.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2 (CONT'D)</p><p> -- through our Lord Jesus Christ,</p><p> we commend to Almighty God our</p><p> brother Archibald --</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> WOODS</p><p></p><p> The demons continue their charge.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> Fatima still stares.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2 (CONT'D)</p><p> -- and we commit his body to the</p><p> ground --</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> WOODS</p><p></p><p> They still continue to charge and exit the woods.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> Fatima's eyes widen.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> They're coming.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> (overlapping)</p><p> -- earth to earth --</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> WOODS</p><p></p><p> Still charging.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> Fatima draws her sword.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Hurry up!</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> (overlapping)</p><p> -- ashes to ashes --</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> WOODS</p><p></p><p> Charging.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> Quino draws an arrow.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> -- dust to dust. --</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> WOODS</p><p></p><p> Closer.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> MONK 2 (CONT'D)</p><p> The Lord bless him and keep him,</p><p> the Lord make his face to shine</p><p> upon him and be gracious unto him --</p><p></p><p> Quino's hand trembles as he holds the bow's draw.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2 (CONT'D)</p><p> the Lord lift up his countenance</p><p> upon him and give him peace. Amen.</p><p></p><p> Quino releases his arrow and takes down the lead demon as it</p><p> pierces his skull.</p><p></p><p> Fatima screams as she charges.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> Bury him quickly!</p><p></p><p> The demons arrive and the remaining monks draw their weapons</p><p> as well.</p><p></p><p> Three monks remain with shovels throwing dirt in the grave.</p><p></p><p> Fatima's sword dices the next demon.</p><p></p><p> Quino fires arrow after arrow.</p><p></p><p> A flying demon soars over Fatima and charges one of the</p><p> shoveling monks.</p><p></p><p> He drops his shovel and begins to shove dirt with his hands.</p><p></p><p> Just as the demon is about to reach him, another monk slices</p><p> it in half with a naginata.</p><p></p><p> The monks circle the grave and thwart demon after demon.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Why do they want him?!</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> They just don't want us to bury</p><p> him?</p><p></p><p> Fatima continues to fight.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> Why not?</p><p></p><p> MONK 3</p><p> It's a long forgotten divine law! </p><p> Bury the dead! Now with the</p><p> plague, the unburied come back as</p><p> demons!</p><p></p><p> Out of the woods, a twenty-foot tall fat man appears. He is</p><p> grotesque and twisted.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA</p><p> What is that?</p><p></p><p> Monk 2 stands in amazement.</p><p></p><p> MONK 2</p><p> I don't know.</p><p></p><p> BLACKOUT</p><p></p><p> FLASHBACK</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. TULIAVILLE</p><p></p><p> Aurorenia tears up the village.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (V.O.)</p><p> (narrative)</p><p> Wow! Demons seem to follow us like</p><p> weevils on rice.</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. MONASTERY - GRAVEYARD</p><p></p><p> The giant beast approaches.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (V.O.)</p><p> (narrative)</p><p> And to think some of them were once</p><p> unburied humans! How are we going</p><p> to defeat this thing?</p><p></p><p> END FLASHBACK</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p> EXT. WOODS</p><p></p><p> Quino, Fatima and the monk venture along a road.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (V.O.)</p><p> (narrative)</p><p> Next time, Quino and I venture on</p><p> and one of the monks tags along. </p><p> Looks like we're headed to Russia!</p><p></p><p> Clouds cover the sky and day turns into night. Rain begins</p><p> to pour.</p><p></p><p> They run towards a cave for cover from the rain. The ground</p><p> collapses from under them and they fall into darkness.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (V.O.)</p><p> (narrative)</p><p> But it's two days to the nearest</p><p> harbor, and Quino and I are</p><p> detoured by a storm, a sinkhole --</p><p></p><p> They get up slowly and in pain. Several glowing, horrific</p><p> figures hover around them.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (V.O.)</p><p> (narrative)</p><p> -- and Ghosts?!</p><p></p><p> Fatima draws her sword. Quino knocks an arrow, and the monk</p><p> slaps his hands together as though praying.</p><p></p><p> FATIMA (V.O.)</p><p> (narrative)</p><p> "How are we going to get out of</p><p> here, Quino?" Come back and find</p><p> out! Next week it's "A PLEA FROM</p><p> BEYOND THE GRAVE".</p><p></p><p> FADE OUT[/sblock]</p><p></p><p><span style="color: darkorange"><strong>Mod Note:</strong> Dude he asked for a paragraph, and you post an entire script? And you force the color to black, so it cannot be read in the commonly used black forum skin. I've put it in an spoiler block, and removed the color. ~Umbran</span></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="HRSegovia, post: 6228488, member: 99950"] I wrote a movie script (which went nowhere, of course), but I'm rather proud of it. Mankind returns to Earth and finds he must take it back from new inhabitants. I figured, as a post release prequel, an anime series based on the Earth survivors left behind (while much of mankind was gone) would be a great setting for BESM. [sblock] DES1E1: Aurorenia and the Stigmata FADE IN GRASSY FIELD - NIGHT A metallic-like star hovers far in the night sky. Two teens lay on the ground. GIRL Wow... it's so far away now. BOY Enjoy it while you can. GIRL What's it like up there? BOY Who cares? The boy sits up. The girl is still staring at the stars. GIRL I do. BOY (rhetorically) Do you think they're actually looking down here hoping to come back? GIRL Maybe. BOY We're dead to them. -- They're happy up there. They're not lonely. They're Safe. GIRL But the plague's gone. BOY They don't know that... and neither do we. The girl lays her head to the side and stares at the woods in the distance. GIRL How long has it been? BOY About an hour. The boy searches the horizon. The girl sits up. GIRL See him? Concentrating on the horizon, the boy simply gives a negative nod. GIRL (CONT'D) Do you think he found anybody else? BOY Maybe. -- Wait, there he is! MAN RUNNING Panting and wheezing, a well built man with a beard sprints as he occasionally glances back in fear. BOY (O.S.) (distant) Hi, Dad! GIRL (O.S.) (distant, overlapping) Daddy! The man gets a concerned look on his face. MAN Get inside, now! The kids continue their greetings. MAN (CONT'D) For God's sake, get back in the shelter! THE TEENS They pause and look at their father in confusion. As the man approaches, several vicious creatures (each different in their own design) rapidly persue him. The children look at each other and run for a horizontal, bunker-like door. GIRL What are they?! BOY I don't know! The girl descends into the opening. The boy stops and glances back for his father. BOY (CONT'D) Hurry, Dad! He begins to cry and runs down the opening. INT. SHELTER It's dark and damp. The two kids stand in the moonlight that shines in. Both of them cry as they glare out the opening, waiting for their father. MAN (O.S.) You're gonna have to run faster then that to catch -- A gruesome growl is followed by a squishy puncture sound. Silence. GIRL (softly) Daddy? The kids continue to stare, waiting for a response. With shocking speed, they briefly see their father reach the opening, but he is jerked back by monstrous hands. Blood sprays into the room and the door slams shut. BLACKOUT BEDROOM - NIGHT A gorgeous woman, about the age of 18 wakes up and catches her self screaming. WOMAN Daddy! -- She closes her eyes and puts her hand to her face. With her other hand, she throws the blanket off of her and reveals her nudity. She turns to stand from her bed and reveals that her back is covered with scars from whiplashes. KITCHEN She enters the room fully clothed and puts on a jacket. She makes no attempt to lighten the room. Instead, she looks out of the window. The sun is beginning to come up. COTTAGE - DAY Barely lit by the dark-blue sky, a tiny shimmer emanates from the hilt of her sword as she steps out and stretches. Mid stretch, she pauses and sniffs. Her face turns to sudden awareness. She leans swiftly to her right, twisting her body and barely dodges the tip of an arrow, arms flailing for balance. A short, stalky figure emerges from the shadows. A gray beard is visible through the shadow of his wide-brim hat. WOMAN Dammit JOAQUIN! JOAQUIN You lost your balance. (sighs) FATIMA... you're slacking. Joaquin turns and begins to walk away. FATIMA That was a high speed sharp stick. Whad'ya expect, QUINO!? He stops. JOAQUIN More. FATIMA Christ! I can't bel -- Joaquin turns and shoots Fatima a sharp look. JOAQUIN Watch your language, Hunter! Remember who you serve! Fatima stands in shock at Joaquin's sudden shouting. Joaquin calms. JOAQUIN (CONT'D) I'm sorry. It's just -- A twig breaks in the distance. Both of them pause, listen, and watch. Fatima reaches for her sword. Joaquin stops her. JOAQUIN (CONT'D) (stern whisper) No. FATIMA (whisper) What? JOAQUIN You're not ready. FATIMA (slightly louder) It's not the first -- JOAQUIN (matching her volume) Are you ever gonna stop questioning me? They hear another snap. From the tall brush, a bluish, three eyed beast emerges. JOAQUIN (CONT'D) Okay, time to run. Fatima draws her sword. FATIMA You know what? -- Three more creatures, each different and just as mean looking, emerge as well. JOAQUIN You're questioning again. The creatures charge. FATIMA You're right, run. Fatima and Quino run in the opposite direction into the tall grass. The dodge their way through the forest of weeds. The demons are close behind. EXT. TULIAVILLE Fatima and Quino climb steps through a wooden archway. They are soaked with water. FATIMA What were you thinking? JOAQUIN We're alive, right? FATIMA If you call cutting a bridge and falling four-hundred feet into a river "alive"? Then yeah, we're alive. A man in hunter clothing stands at the top. HUNTER State your business. Quino and Fatima stop in their tracks, noticing the man. JOAQUIN Oh! Dear. My apologies. We're traveling through and need lodging. HUNTER One night. Be quick with your business. These townspeople aren't fond of strangers. INT. SPEARED HEDGEHOG INN & TAVERN Quino and Fatima sit at a table with plates in front of them. The plates have pieces of meat skewered on hedgehog quills. The place is full, but conversation is minimal. Most seem to be watching the visitors. FLASHBACK INT. MAYPOLE INN Fatima sits at a table. Suddenly, with a loud crack, Fatima screams in pain. Her white shirt is stained with blood along her back. The crowd watches in amazement as more cracks are heard and more blood appears on her back. Nobody is striking her. BACK TO SCENE Fatima flinches. JOAQUIN You okay? FATIMA What am I, Quino? Quino looks around. JOAQUIN Shhh! You don't want these people to hear. They don't like hunters. FATIMA Aren't these the people I'm trying to save? Quino closes his eyes and sighs. JOAQUIN Yes. But they fear change. These are hard times, and all they know is trouble follows people like you. They are already suffering. FATIMA People like me? What kind of cryptic crap is this? I'm tired of the games! JOAQUIN Fatima. You have the stigmata. You've been chosen by God. Fatima slams her fist on the table. FATIMA I don't even believe! Onlookers worry. A bouncer exits from behind the bar and heads towards the table. JOAQUIN Those things are real. Aren't they? And so are the marks on your back. And your new powers. FATIMA Why me, huh? The bouncer arrives at the table. BOUNCER I'm gonna have to ask you to leave. JOAQUIN We're not done with our meals. The bouncer grabs the plates and turns them upside-down on the table. BOUNCER Now you are. Fatima stands. JOAQUIN Fatima, no! FATIMA Listen -- The bouncer puts his hand on her shoulder firmly. BOUNCER No! You listen! Fatima grabs his hand and places her other on his elbow, locking his arm and slamming his head onto the table, pressing his face into the food. The bouncer grunts and The crowd stands in opposition. A woman screams from outside. SCREAMING WOMAN (O.S.) They're here! Demons! An onlooker walks by Fatima and points at her. ONLOOKER This is your fault! He runs outside. Others follow. Fatima lets the bouncer go. He collapses to the floor. JOAQUIN Time to get to work. Fatima draws her sword. FATIMA I'm ready. JOAQUIN No you're not. Fatima looks at Quino. JOAQUIN (CONT'D) But we don't have a choice now, do we? EXT. TULIAVILLE A giant woman with a snake body and eight arms torments the town. TOWNSMAN It's Aurorenia! FATIMA The serpent queen. -- Die! Fatima charges with her sword. Aurorenia screams and several smaller demons fly from her mouth toward Fatima. Fatima slices through them like jungle vines. Aurorenia swipes her giant tail through the town, wiping away fifteen townsfolk and smashing into a shop. Fatima leaps into the air. She manages to slice off an arm, but Aurorenia slaps her away with another. Fatima slams into a wall. Aurorenia spits more demons at Fatima. Joaquin draws an arrow and fires. The arrow cuts through the air and pierces Aurorenia's skull. Aurorenia flings her head back in pain, then recovers and breaks the arrow off. Fatima fights-off the smaller demons. FATIMA We can't kill her! JOAQUIN There's got to be a way! -- There's always a way! Quino draws another arrow and fires it. Aurorenia is about to spit more demons, but the arrow pierces her mouth, sealing it shut. She throws her tail around in pain causing more destruction. Fatima finishes the smaller demons. She begins to charge Aurorenia, but flinches in pain and falls to the ground. FLASHBACK INT. MAYPOLE INN Fatima sits at a table. Suddenly, with a loud crack, Fatima screams in pain. Her white shirt is stained with blood along her back. VOICE (V.O.) I grant thee the power of Holy Vengeance. The crowd watches in amazement as more cracks are heard and more blood appears on her back. Nobody is striking her. BACK TO SCENE Fatima recovers and looks at Aurorenia intently. She stands and walks towards Aurorenia. Aurorenia makes another swipe with her tail. Fatima leaps over it as it slams into another building, shattering it to splinters. Fatima stops and raises her right hand and closes her eyes. A giant, blue, spinning cross appears in her open palm. The scars on her back begin to bleed. FATIMA Holy -- She throws her hand forward, flinging the cross like a giant boomerang at Aurorenia. FATIMA (CONT'D) -- Avenger! The cross spins and spirals toward Aurorenia. It impales her and explodes into a blue sphere of light. Aurorenia screams as she disintegrates. The dust settles and the townsfolk emerge. They look around. The bouncer shows up behind Fatima. He looks concerned as he glares around at the townsfolk. BOUNCER You should leave. The townsfolk look at Fatima. TOWNSMAN 2 This is your fault! BOUNCER Quickly. JOAQUIN She saved you! A stone hits Quino on the head. FATIMA You ungrateful -- More stones fly. BOUNCER Now! The bouncer gets in the way of the stones to provide cover for Fatima and Quino. Fatima and Quino run. EXT. WOODS Quino and Fatima are on foot. FATIMA I need to rest. JOAQUIN It seems safe. Fatima plops her butt down near a tree. FATIMA So what was the question? JOAQUIN What would you wish for if you found a genie in a bottle? FATIMA I don't know. JOAQUIN It's different when money isn't a factor anymore, huh? FATIMA What would you wish for? A young male voice resounds. VOICE (O.S.) I'd rather find a message in a bottle than a genie. Fatima jumps up. A teenage boy leans on the tree at which Fatima sat. He is dressed in a monk's robe. TEENAGE BOY I don't want to play God, just hear him. FATIMA Who are you? The boy walks toward Fatima. TEENAGE BOY My name's Jacopo. I live here. Quino looks around. JOAQUIN In the woods? JACOPO There's a monastery nearby. Where are you headed? JOAQUIN Everywhere... and nowhere. JACOPO I thought only my teacher talked in riddles. FATIMA We've just started. We're searching for answers -- JOAQUIN -- and demons. Jacopo motions to Fatima and Quino. JACOPO You've come to the right place. -- C'mon. INT. MONASTERY Several monks and the party sit in a circle on the floor. MONK 1 These are the end times, and we are in judgement. JOAQUIN So these really are demons. The monk looks at Fatima. MONK 1 And you really do have the stigmata. FATIMA And I'm really gonna die. The monk opens his palms. He has circular scars on his wrists. MONK 1 With the end comes eternal life for those who are saved. JACOPO But who will be saved, master? FATIMA Those who are saved are already gone. Of those of us left, only the redeemed will go to Heaven. Quino looks around. JOAQUIN But monks -- MONK 1 -- are only human. -- It will be far, but you will find the path to your redemption in Russia. There you will begin your journey to your final destination. It will be long and treacherous, but it is your lot. Remember your place as a hunter along the way. Fatima crosses her arms and scoffs. FATIMA Why should I? MONK 1 Because you know he's real. And you know the alternative. FATIMA Damned if I do; Damned if I don't. MONK 1 Only if you don't. -- You can sleep here tonight. You journey in the morning. BEDROOM Fatima is asleep in bed. She wakes to the sound of a grunt. HALLWAY She follows the grunts down the hallway as they become yelps. She reaches a spiral stairwell. STAIRS The yelps become screams. At the bottom of the stairway is light. A shadow is cast on the wall of a monk as he flails around in pain. CATACOMBS She reaches the bottom of the stairs and finds Monk 1 flailing in pain. A spray of blood splashes on her face as the monk swings his arm. His wounds have reopened and his face is covered in blood. He gurgles blood as an invisible spear pierces his lung. The monk collapses in a pool of his blood. Fatima looks around. There are other monks in the room. Tears well up in her eyes. FATIMA (top of her lungs) And you didn't help him! MONK 2 There was nothing we could do but pray for his soul. Fatima cries and gasps for air as she looks at him and feels her body. MONK 2 Yes. Your fate is the same. She shakes her head "no". Quino shows up behind her. She turns around, falls to her knees and holds him. MONK 3 They will be attracted by this. You should go. JOAQUIN What will you do? MONK 3 Fight them. JOAQUIN Can you? MONK 2 We don't have a choice. Fatima sniffles as she stands. FATIMA Yes you do. -- We'll stay. The monks nod in acknowledgement. MONK 3 Let's bury our brother before they arrive. EXT. MONASTERY - GRAVEYARD Twenty monks crowd an open grave. MONK 2 In sure and certain hope of the resurrection to eternal life -- WOODS Several different demons rush through he forest as they grunt, heave, and drool. GRAVEYARD Fatima turns to the woods and watches. MONK 2 (CONT'D) -- through our Lord Jesus Christ, we commend to Almighty God our brother Archibald -- WOODS The demons continue their charge. GRAVEYARD Fatima still stares. MONK 2 (CONT'D) -- and we commit his body to the ground -- WOODS They still continue to charge and exit the woods. GRAVEYARD Fatima's eyes widen. FATIMA They're coming. MONK 2 (overlapping) -- earth to earth -- WOODS Still charging. GRAVEYARD Fatima draws her sword. FATIMA Hurry up! MONK 2 (overlapping) -- ashes to ashes -- WOODS Charging. GRAVEYARD Quino draws an arrow. MONK 2 -- dust to dust. -- WOODS Closer. GRAVEYARD MONK 2 (CONT'D) The Lord bless him and keep him, the Lord make his face to shine upon him and be gracious unto him -- Quino's hand trembles as he holds the bow's draw. MONK 2 (CONT'D) the Lord lift up his countenance upon him and give him peace. Amen. Quino releases his arrow and takes down the lead demon as it pierces his skull. Fatima screams as she charges. MONK 2 Bury him quickly! The demons arrive and the remaining monks draw their weapons as well. Three monks remain with shovels throwing dirt in the grave. Fatima's sword dices the next demon. Quino fires arrow after arrow. A flying demon soars over Fatima and charges one of the shoveling monks. He drops his shovel and begins to shove dirt with his hands. Just as the demon is about to reach him, another monk slices it in half with a naginata. The monks circle the grave and thwart demon after demon. FATIMA Why do they want him?! MONK 2 They just don't want us to bury him? Fatima continues to fight. FATIMA Why not? MONK 3 It's a long forgotten divine law! Bury the dead! Now with the plague, the unburied come back as demons! Out of the woods, a twenty-foot tall fat man appears. He is grotesque and twisted. FATIMA What is that? Monk 2 stands in amazement. MONK 2 I don't know. BLACKOUT FLASHBACK EXT. TULIAVILLE Aurorenia tears up the village. FATIMA (V.O.) (narrative) Wow! Demons seem to follow us like weevils on rice. EXT. MONASTERY - GRAVEYARD The giant beast approaches. FATIMA (V.O.) (narrative) And to think some of them were once unburied humans! How are we going to defeat this thing? END FLASHBACK EXT. WOODS Quino, Fatima and the monk venture along a road. FATIMA (V.O.) (narrative) Next time, Quino and I venture on and one of the monks tags along. Looks like we're headed to Russia! Clouds cover the sky and day turns into night. Rain begins to pour. They run towards a cave for cover from the rain. The ground collapses from under them and they fall into darkness. FATIMA (V.O.) (narrative) But it's two days to the nearest harbor, and Quino and I are detoured by a storm, a sinkhole -- They get up slowly and in pain. Several glowing, horrific figures hover around them. FATIMA (V.O.) (narrative) -- and Ghosts?! Fatima draws her sword. Quino knocks an arrow, and the monk slaps his hands together as though praying. FATIMA (V.O.) (narrative) "How are we going to get out of here, Quino?" Come back and find out! Next week it's "A PLEA FROM BEYOND THE GRAVE". FADE OUT[/sblock] [color=darkorange][B]Mod Note:[/B] Dude he asked for a paragraph, and you post an entire script? And you force the color to black, so it cannot be read in the commonly used black forum skin. I've put it in an spoiler block, and removed the color. ~Umbran[/color] [/QUOTE]
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