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Message: <blockquote data-quote="MoonSong" data-source="post: 7882850" data-attributes="member: 6689464">Ok, going by the thread premise in the OP, and limiting stuff to just ED powers, I'd make these changes:TFAIt is mostly fine, just some minor edits:<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Cut the pirates. The whole scene is pointless.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Remove the "Don't force me to use clones!" line</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Make Maz say something along the lines "A traveler from Bespin V was here a few years back...". That's it, don't make a mystery where there's no answer to be had.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Switch "Hosnian prime" for "Coruscant". If it looks like a Corruscant, fills the place in the story of a Coruscant and quacks like a Coruscant then let it be Coruscant damn it! Just a line in passing saying "this is another planet" after the fact just cheapens the whole thing.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">CGI Phasma into the "Traitor scene"</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">I wouldn't change the third act.</li> </ul>TLJ<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Change the narration so it is Snoke's presence Luke is responding to rather than wanting to murder Kylo.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Cut short the Canto Bight scene. Remove Rose's rant and just cut the whole thing after DJ opens the cell door. Next time we see these people, they are on the ship already.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Cut some of Luke's antics</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Remove the kiss, it is too soon.</li> </ul>RoS<ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Remove the narration with CGI Leia and Kylo's demise foreshadowing, repaint the second lightsaber so it is Luke's second lightsaber.</li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">Don't have Kylo die, end the movie on that kiss.</li> </ul>(If possible replace Palpatine with a CGI Snoke)</blockquote>

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