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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Napftor" data-source="post: 535198" data-attributes="member: 617">That thing is toooo funny.  Check out my Oscar-nominated script!  <img src="https://cdn.jsdelivr.net/joypixels/assets/8.0/png/unicode/64/1f600.png" class="smilie smilie--emoji" loading="lazy" width="64" height="64" alt=":D" title="Big grin    :D"  data-smilie="8"data-shortname=":D" />Star Trek:TimeloopWritten By:NapftorThe film opens with some really annoying credits that make the audience's eyes hurt. After the credits, we see everyone at Federation HQ eating donuts. This confuses the audience to no end. Next, we cut to the Enterprise. Throughout the movie, the ship interiors are filmed too dark to see things clearly. Here, we see the TNG crew. They are looking around the Enterprise for spare parts to fix the replicator. This scene is lame. During this scene, Picard whines about having to drink coffee instead of Earl Grey tea. The crew is then interrupted! As a result, the TNG crew must a donut-harvesting planet to investigate why the Federation has lost contact with it. Thus, beginning their mission. When they arrive at this mission, Data climbs into a photon torpedo just to "experience it like a human would". This scene is embarrassing. But suddenly, there is an action scene involving the crew seeing their lives flash before their eyes! This scene could have been very action-packed, but is very short, unfortunately. Later on, Picard finds out that that a rupture in the time-space continuum has isolated the planet Donut-Five, and thus the plot of the film finally begins. Soon, a member of the TNG crew talks to Jake Sisko, who is recognized by many TNG fans, though this person doesn't really help the plot. Then, Kom'again, the film's obvious bad guy, is revealed. But Kom'again is not REALLY that bad, because hasn't been born yet. The crew then learns that Donut-Five is in grave danger! And they must come to the rescue! A few minutes later, there is an embarrassing scene where Data sings 'In the Year 2525.' The audience groans. And later, Worf is even more embarrassing because he spills hydraulic fluid on his crotch and everyone thinks he has wet himself. This ticks off many Klingon fans in the audience. Later on, Troi, who had nothing else to do in the film, eats chocolate. Unfortunately it doesn't help the plot. A little later, Dr. Crusher slams a tricorder continuously into her forehead. The audience doesn't laugh, however. Picard and his Away Team beams to the swamp. Which looks almost cinematic, but not quite. Crusher and Geordi do absolutely nothing for the duration of the film.Soon, the audience gets a feeling of Deja Vu. Because the crew fights a cloud with a machine in the center. This seems verrrry familiar... Then, for no reason, someone in the film says 'Crap on a stick!!!' Nerds in the audience think this is cool and edgy. The crew discovers that Kom'again has a time shield! This makes things very dangerous! Then, one of the crewmembers says 'Time is like a donut!!' Even though this makes no sense. In their attempts to stop Kom'again, the Enterprise is seen shifting into the likeness of its predecessors when it flies through the time shield. This looks really cool... but doesn't stop Kom'again.Soon, Riker shoots at Kom'again. But this accomplishes absolutely nothing. There is a final showdown in a nebula called The Jack Daniels. In a fit of rage, Kom'again attempts to activate his time shield! Time is running out, so Picard beams over and attempts to stop him. Eventually, Picard violently and mercilessly kills Kom'again by tying a concrete block to his ankles and throwing him out an airlock. Picard is almost killed in the process, but luckily Geordi saves Picard at the last moment. Later, Picard contemplates on what has happened. As a result of this mission, Picard has resolved his problems with having to drink coffee instead of Earl Grey tea. Picard then gives a boring speech about the shape of donuts reflecting that of his own life. The TNG crew then beams back to the Enterprise, which warps off into space. The TNG theme plays on the soundtrack.THE END</blockquote>

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