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Message: <blockquote data-quote="ElectricDragon" data-source="post: 4977211" data-attributes="member: 10778">Isn't a flesh golem really a patchwork golem? A patchwork of parts from different creatures. If I had instead made it a quilt golem would that have been better?The comet was the thing that again activated the golem, I thought that was apparent, maybe I should have posted extra material, too. If you read his commands, and that the 1st command was ignored, that has to mean that the 2nd command is still active if it applies, the comet makes it apply again.Golem tied to comet tied to sleeping sickness tied to shocking arrows: all found in ruins of bloody dungeon. I saw criticism of my entry but none of Iron Sky's; what's up with that, was his perfect? I have two plot hooks for if the party is HQ'd in the town or just passing through. Yes, the comet didn't come into the story at all except in passing, but the same is true of Iron Sky's comet. My comet caused a golem to go on the rampage, kidnapping people inadvertently freeing ancient people from a sleeping death of 15 thousand years. Let's see, moneylender: mine shows up 3-4 times in the story and is aggressive. His shows up once and is powerful. Character development then doesn't matterShocking Arrows, mine are carried by the golem to wake up the sleeping dead (tied into both), his are carried by the lich (moneylender) and are just what is needed to activate this multi-generational, more-powerful-than-any-god golem.I didn't add sex to mine, I guess I should have linked porn. I thought this was a family-oriented site though so, sex wasn't even considered, stupid me.My only real weak point was the bloody dungeon, which was only bloody by tale, a red herriing for the players. The two unique undead were meant to be "survivors" of this dungeon and what it did to people. You didn't see that though.I don't mind criticism, when it is meant to help provide a means to better one's stories, but phoamslinger's criticism was more: your sucks, his is great. And this after delaying the judgement for more than 3 days. Thank you.Don't expect me to try this again, I can see that the judges have their favorites. I have been DMing for more than 30 years, I have had some of my adventures written up in Dragon magazine, and at least one editorial about one specific adventure that shocked the editor enough to spend the whole issue talking about it. I know what kind of DM I am.I don't do 4th edition, I don't have a lot of computer savvy, I don't do computer graphics, but my adventures are talked about for years. You should be so lucky to play in one of my campaigns.If this post gets me banned, so be it; I'm kinda peeved right now.Ciao,Dave</blockquote>

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