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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Waylander the Slayer" data-source="post: 5661745" data-attributes="member: 1830">Thanks all! Thanks Judges, for doing an underappreciated task; your criticisms and analysis show that you are awesome and it was interesting to note the very different POV [RG on one end, Wicht the other, and Rune somewhere in the middle].Pour, you are incredibly creative, and a evocative writer to boot; i considered you the favorite after reading all the first round entries. In fact, The Proposal remains one of my favorite entries of all time (better than any of my entries). I am a little disappointed that you didnt get the time to finish or polish your entry; I think the judgement would have been a tad different if you had (i noted an entire encounter missing from your entry-the drug dealers). I loved the concept for your final entry, it reminded me a lot of Spartacus, and the dominatrix was an awesome and audacious touch. As for the final round entry- i had the hardest time incorporating the Devilish Smile and the Pavestones of Good Intentions; the latter since they were paving stones- i did think of the road to hell route, but the specific nature of the paving stones ruled it out, though it might have been worth considering, after further thought. I do hate the liniarity of my adventure; my orginal design had it more like a flow chart, with each action changing future tiles with multiple options of what each of the futures were, but space constraints made me trim down the entry to its bare bones and toss out the full "spread" of my concept. I'd recommend anyone considering running it to get rid of the tile concept and make it more active and in the present, i.e, with the PCs attending the wedding and make it more Othelloesque with the PC interaction saving the relations or causing the vendetta.Overall, i really enjoyed the process; it has helped me be more creative and has improved my GMing as well. What more could i ask, in the end?</blockquote>

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