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<blockquote data-quote="Deuce Traveler" data-source="post: 6492910" data-attributes="member: 34958"><p>[MENTION=976]Imhotepthewise[/MENTION] said in the scheduling thread:</p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>I just wanted to say that I thought Wicht's story was better written and seemed a bit tighter than [MENTION=976]Imhotepthewise[/MENTION] 's story. Hotep will do much better next time if he tries to tighten up some of the quest plot threads. Wicht also had some elements that seemed shoehorned in, but I really like his use of Devious Machinations when it comes to the fake death threats giving way to serious death threats and the confusion the parallel plot lines brought. Also his use of Dwarven Tragedian was entertaining and better implemented. Hotep did use the Chicken Dance better than Wicht, but for both that ingredient seemed tossed in for flavor and not integral. Inscrutable Fey was a tie for me. The Anarchist's Castle leans more toward hotep, though that also seemed shoehorned. Magic moth was also a tie, but not in a good way, as both seemed not to use the ingredient in a way that was integral. So all in all, I agree with Wicht taking this due to his two winning ingredients being so well used and the tighter way he had written his adventure. But Hotep could have one by just improving on one of those ingredients he had tied Wicht on, or by tightening up the writing a bit.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Deuce Traveler, post: 6492910, member: 34958"] [MENTION=976]Imhotepthewise[/MENTION] said in the scheduling thread: I just wanted to say that I thought Wicht's story was better written and seemed a bit tighter than [MENTION=976]Imhotepthewise[/MENTION] 's story. Hotep will do much better next time if he tries to tighten up some of the quest plot threads. Wicht also had some elements that seemed shoehorned in, but I really like his use of Devious Machinations when it comes to the fake death threats giving way to serious death threats and the confusion the parallel plot lines brought. Also his use of Dwarven Tragedian was entertaining and better implemented. Hotep did use the Chicken Dance better than Wicht, but for both that ingredient seemed tossed in for flavor and not integral. Inscrutable Fey was a tie for me. The Anarchist's Castle leans more toward hotep, though that also seemed shoehorned. Magic moth was also a tie, but not in a good way, as both seemed not to use the ingredient in a way that was integral. So all in all, I agree with Wicht taking this due to his two winning ingredients being so well used and the tighter way he had written his adventure. But Hotep could have one by just improving on one of those ingredients he had tied Wicht on, or by tightening up the writing a bit. [/QUOTE]
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