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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Nifft" data-source="post: 705128" data-attributes="member: 6562">Round 1, Match 2 JUDGEMENTIn order of posting:Torx:What was GOOD:Hobgoblin Platoon: They acted just like I imagine hobgoblins acting. Cruel and harshly regimented. I imagine plenty of people will be borrowing your conception of their tactics.Jilted Lover: Poor Krie'Sn! I felt for him.Lost Religion: Man, what a way to lose your religion. Again, I felt for Krie'Sn.Personality: This is a kobold with a story -- if he ever figures out what it is. His personality is great, but hard to discover.What was BAD:Golden Raiment: Did you misread this as Goblin Raiment? Even that felt tacked-on, given that goblins don't have tails, so kobolds wouldn't wear goblin clothes well.Kyton Kidnapper(s): Great image, but inaccessible.Ignorance of the Law: If "the Law" is the word of a God, sure. But this seemed not so much a devine restriction as a simple curse. Given that you dropped a kobold into a Hobgoblin Platoon, I'm sure there were plenty of laws (secular, hobgoblin laws) that the kobold didn't know.Utility: HOW am I ever going to get PCs to talk to this guy?! He'll last three rounds of combat at high level -- while the party may be slightly puzzled that one of the ash-shadows is short and has a tail, they probably won't even notice that. His story begs for a charitable party of PCs to rescue him (from his amnesia) and re-unite him with his love, but his personality forbids it.theRuinedOne:What was GOOD:Golden Raiment: Nice. Since it's a badge of office, he can drop references to it throughout his early career, so later (when the party meets him and he's powerful) they'll know what him wearing it means.Ignorance of the Law and Hobgoblin Platoon: These are nicely used as turning points in Horace's life.Kyton Kidnapper: Perfect. The first Kyton Kidnapper is long dead -- whoever bound the kyton into the flask -- and the second is the kyton itself.Lost Religion: Very well done, and especially nice that he gets it back in the end.What was BAD:Jilted Lover: Horace wasn't jilted by his love. Stood-up, perhaps.Final Judgement:Torx- Golden Raiment: 0 -- possible misreading?- Hobgoblin Platoon: 8- Ignorance of the Law: 5- Jilted Lover: 7- Kyton Kidnapper: 5- Lost Religion: 9Personality: 13Utility: 6theRuinedOne- Golden Raiment: 7- Hobgoblin Platoon: 6- Ignorance of the Law: 8- Jilted Lover: 0- Kyton Kidnapper: 10- Lost Religion: 9Personality: 15Utility: 13Final Scores:Torx: 53/100theRuinedOne: 68/100Congradulations, theRuinedOne! -- Nifft</blockquote>

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