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<blockquote data-quote="Evilhalfling" data-source="post: 2304544" data-attributes="member: 16991"><p>Dremmen, good game. Im sorry that you had so little time to write your enrty - mine took better than 5 hours to finish. It was still a complete wreck at 2 hrs, I am impressed by what you mangaged to submit. Esp the Enchanted forest/dryads - although zomie hookers? ew. </p><p></p><p>to readers: Sorry about my first paragraph, it was actually tacked on as an afterthought to provide better justification for the title of queen. As the PCs would prolly not ever find this out, it could have been cut, or edited. If I can edit this first pargaraph now I will, perhaps even changing the wand as well (as described below) </p><p></p><p>I was worried about the linear nature of my adventure, but honestly I write linear adventures. I try and avoid railroading and am willing to let the campagin arcs go off in nearly any direction, but my actual adventures are straight forward. When I have run my group through mystries, 1-2 players do most of the work, dragging the others along. I have done non-linear one shots, it looks like I need more practice in it. </p><p></p><p>You didnt mention that I forgot to set the level and number of appropriate adventures - </p><p>which was my first regret (not last) after posting it. </p><p></p><p>I was very proud of Nightshade - name/theme/poison/clues - good old google.</p><p>and most nervous about the see - I never found a great way to tie it in. Im not sure that you caught that a See is the seat of a bishop, such as the See of Canturbury. The fact that all the legends are oral increases the chance of this misconception. Its a good pun, but there is no great reason for it to be there and if you take out the archron fight, its a pretty boring set. </p><p> I disagree about the arrogant archon, LG can be easily offended by any other point of view, and LG can certainly be violent. This was really just an exuse for a second fight for the adventure, and Im not that happy with it either. </p><p></p><p>Oh the wand (sigh). I was going to use spell locate creature first (in a scroll or item), and missed the change in spell duration. The simple way to correct this would be to give it 50 charges - but even this change assumes the PCs would be willing to burn out the wand on a single adventure.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Evilhalfling, post: 2304544, member: 16991"] Dremmen, good game. Im sorry that you had so little time to write your enrty - mine took better than 5 hours to finish. It was still a complete wreck at 2 hrs, I am impressed by what you mangaged to submit. Esp the Enchanted forest/dryads - although zomie hookers? ew. to readers: Sorry about my first paragraph, it was actually tacked on as an afterthought to provide better justification for the title of queen. As the PCs would prolly not ever find this out, it could have been cut, or edited. If I can edit this first pargaraph now I will, perhaps even changing the wand as well (as described below) I was worried about the linear nature of my adventure, but honestly I write linear adventures. I try and avoid railroading and am willing to let the campagin arcs go off in nearly any direction, but my actual adventures are straight forward. When I have run my group through mystries, 1-2 players do most of the work, dragging the others along. I have done non-linear one shots, it looks like I need more practice in it. You didnt mention that I forgot to set the level and number of appropriate adventures - which was my first regret (not last) after posting it. I was very proud of Nightshade - name/theme/poison/clues - good old google. and most nervous about the see - I never found a great way to tie it in. Im not sure that you caught that a See is the seat of a bishop, such as the See of Canturbury. The fact that all the legends are oral increases the chance of this misconception. Its a good pun, but there is no great reason for it to be there and if you take out the archron fight, its a pretty boring set. I disagree about the arrogant archon, LG can be easily offended by any other point of view, and LG can certainly be violent. This was really just an exuse for a second fight for the adventure, and Im not that happy with it either. Oh the wand (sigh). I was going to use spell locate creature first (in a scroll or item), and missed the change in spell duration. The simple way to correct this would be to give it 50 charges - but even this change assumes the PCs would be willing to burn out the wand on a single adventure. [/QUOTE]
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