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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Jemal" data-source="post: 4789544" data-attributes="member: 9026">OK, just went over the characters in the Rogue's GalleryFirst I have a few requests for everyone, then I'll get down to the individual nitpicking.1: Please include somewhere prominent (Such as at the begining of your sheet) which alternate source you have access to.  for some characters it is obvious, but others not so much.2: If your ability scores are modified due to race/etc, please include this with your scores.3: Please Indicate # of ranks in any skills.4: Don't forget to include age and appearance (Ht, Wt, Eye/hair color)5: Please Include Prices for all your gear.6: Please include what source any feat/item/spell/etc is from if it is not PHB, for quicker reference.[sblock=Character Nitpicks]Renau1g Scrolls are magic items, they'll have to go.Where did you get the 'Modron' language from?  I was under the impression they didn't exist anymore.Artificers only get d6 hd, and you have 10 con, so you should have 12 hp, not 14 (Unless I missed something).I suggest using some of your gold to buy the material components required for your infusions.  many of them have costly components (That is to say, they have listed gp costs)*The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*Myth and LegendCould you include a section where you indicate your most common attack routine? (IE: Long sword + X, 1d8+X damage, threat 19-20/x2)RE: Knowledge - No, you may choose a knowledge that is NOT a class skill to GAIN as a class skill.  The 'bonus' only applies if you allready had EVERY knowledge skill as a class skill.None of the carrying containers in the PHB really detail how much they can carry, so I guess as long as it makes sense, then you can put it in them.  Just indicate what's in which container and if I think it seems like too much I'll tell you.Arrows come in quivers of 20 for 1 gp.Food and water will be provided by the schoolA few notes on your horse: He won't be allowed to wander the halls with you, you'll have to stable him until you need him.  Also, not all of the encounters in the training room will have space for your mount.  *The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*RhunI see you're not done yet.  I read through what you do have and only have one comment: I'd like you to take a different Taboo.  The 'can't eat meat' thing won't come up as the school can offer you any form of food you require.  As such it's not much of a restriction.*The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*RpgramenYour shortbow attack should be 1 higher. (+1 bab, +4 dex, +1 mw=+6.)  Also don't forget to add the +1 damage for point blank on your second entry. (It should be attack +7, damage 1d6+1 if within 30')Everburning torch is magical, and therefore not allowed.*The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*GlasseyeAs with Myth's horse, your pack dog will not be allowed to roam the halls with you.  Exceptions are made for animal companions and familiars, but not pets/mounts/beasts of burden.I count only 36 of your 38 skill points spent, and I don't think any of your listed skills are cross class.*The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*RathanIs there a mechanical reason you chose Boccob?  Some feat/spell/PrC down the line you plan on taking?Sunrods are Alchemical, Everburning Torches are Magical.  these will need to be replaced.I don't allow unspecified costly material components.  If you have spells that require costly material components you'll have to pay for each seperately and keep track of what you have.*The Essay is supposed to be from the student.*TherocYour HP breakdown should read 2d4+4 (2/lvl for 14 con), but the final result is correct: 12 hpDon't forget that as Wizards have all knowledge skills, you gain a +2 school bonus to any knowledge check that you have max ranks in.Still need feats, spells, equipment.*The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*IshalleatyourfleshYou need an alignmentYou should have a -4 size penalty to Intimidate for being small. Instead of just writing 'attack', please indicate what you are attacking with.*The dean accepts your Essay pending further analysis of your capabilities*[/sblock]Allright, that's everybody who's posted in the RG so far.  Apologies to anybody who may have added/edited while I was typing this, it did take a little while.</blockquote>

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