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Message: <blockquote data-quote="JMISBEST" data-source="post: 9489089" data-attributes="member: 7036159">Your thoughts on the opening scene from A Harry Potter themed Dnd Campaign of mine, naturally I'm borrowing characters from other sources to make it a "for a laugh campaign"Its from the perspective of a unknown female, who we later learn is Hermione Granger, that's the deputy head, head of Gryfindor House and Transfiguration teacher but isn't Mcgonacal who currently holds all 3 positions and don't just analyse itThe students in front of her were still clad in four different uniforms, symbolizing their Houses, yet they mingled with each other. Slytherins sat with the lions of Gryffindor, joined on the side by the ravens of RavenclawThey all sat together, irrespective of their houses, and chatted with each other, with several glances inching towards her as they whispered about her, just as she had once done for her own professorsYet the students in front of her weren't just humans, there were Veela's, Hags, Vampires, Goblins and Werewolves among themTheir was even a few dozen aliens, each with obvious signs of their extra-terrestrial origins, and a few dozen half aliens, each with obvious signs of their half alien heritage, among themShe looked at Aleita Hopper The Angelan whose most obvious sign of her alien heritage was her shimmering white wings, famous as Hogwarts 1st alien student, 1st alien prefect, 1st alien head girl and widely known ambition to be The Wizarding Worlds 1st alien head of stateShe gives herself a smile and says to herself “I can never truly express how proud I am that Hogwarts 1st alien student was sorted into Gryfindor, the house I am head of, and in the same year I became head of Gryfindor in”Her gaze moved to Raphtalia Iwatani, the alien from The Racoon Demi Human Race, her 2 most notable alien features being her bushy Racoon Tail and having fur rather then hair, it was known that her ambition was to be Hogwarts 1st alien headmistressNow her gaze moved to Sabine Wren, the half alien that was half human/half Mandolorian, the most obvious sign of her half alien heritage was her greyish brown skin, it was known that her ambition was to be The 1st half alien to be head of The Auror DepartmentShe says “I really should tell Aleita, Raphtalia and Sabine that despite all the advantages in equality The Wizarding World has seen in the last 10 years that The Wizarding World won’t accept its 1st alien head of state, 1st alien Headmistress of Hogwarts or 1st half alien to be head of The Auror Department”Pause for thought then “then again considering that Magical Folk only leant about aliens 9 years ago maybe I should give equality in The Wizarding World more credit maybe it just needs more time, after all aliens were only confirmed to exist 9 years ago, so maybe Aleita, Raphtalia and Sabine can achieve their ambitions”Now her gaze moves to Yuki Yamato, the half alien that was half human/half Iskandran, the 2 most obvious signs of her half alien heritage was her yellow skin and yellow eyes, she thinks “her ambition of creating A Cure for Werewolfism is achievableTheir was even A Malfroy in Gryfindor, 3 Weasley's in Slytherin, A member of The Grabbe Family(A family not known for its intelligence) in Ravenclaw(The house known for valuing intelligence), and a dozen Muggleborns in Slytherin, all 4 of which are things that a mere 5 years ago people would have laughed at and called impossibleLooking over at Professor Aleita Schafaer she thinks “theirs even A Muggle teaching Muggle Studies, true The Muggle that teaches Muggle Studies must be either the mother or the father of A Muggleborn Witch or Wizard or married to a witch or wizard but the mere fact that theirs A Muggle teaching at Hogwarts is a massive step forwards”She thinks of how theirs talks of opening other subjects to Muggles and how the only subjects that can realistically be opened to Muggles with a lot of changes are Muggle Studies, Potions, Astrology and HerbologyShe think of how this isn’t because of bias, racism, bigoty, prejudice or something similar, rather its because most other subjects can’t be done by Muggles because either they require magic or are too dangerous or they require magic and are too dangerousThe age of Moderation and revolution. In the years after the final defeat of Voldemort, the wizarding world had been filled with strife as they all mourned the loss of hundreds and hundreds of lives that had been lost to the conflictAmong them where 3 of her 5 closest friends, who will never get to experance the joys of parenthood or growing old with the love of their lifeHeadmaster Flitwick stood up from his seat and struck his glass with his fork, making the Hall quiet down."Now that all of you are well fed and sorted, it is time for me to make some announcements," the Charms Master's voice rang through the HallUnlike his predecessor, Professor McGonagall, he was less strict and was more inclined towards changeShe could see the students focusing on the man as the magically amplified voice spread through the Hall"First of all, after much demand, a school football tournaments similar to the Quidditch tournament has been approved by the Board," he beganShe saw students in the Hall cheer loudly at the announcement. For over the years the football fever had overtaken Hogawats as well, with even purebloods playing the sport, and now Hogwarts would have its own football tournament"Other information regarding this has been displayed on the Notice Boards and has been conveyed to your Head of Houses," the Headmaster added with a smile, and after a small cough, the students became quiet so the man could continue"Secondly, as an ex-dueling champion, I was very disappointed with our performance in the last Tournaments," he said pointedlyShe saw the current Headboy, Edgar Bones, look down, embarrassed for he had been caught under a veela's charms in the quarter-final, loosing what should have been an easy winFlitwick announces "1 final thing, for the 1st time in Hogwarts 1,020 year history Ancient Magic and the Dark Arts will be taught at Hogwlarts but only to 7th yearsWhat’s more the 1st teacher of both of these will be the 1 and only Delphini Riddle, Daughter of Voldemort who is as different as her father as day is to night and proved instrumental in Voldemorts defeat"To the surprise of readers the appointment of Delphini Riddle, Daughter of Voldemort who is as different as her father as day is to night and proved instrumental in Voldemorts defeat is met with thunderous applauseBut the person whose perspective the scene is from is clearly very worried, for almost 6 years The Ministry had suspected that Voldemort had been a mere pawn for a far greater evil and a mere 46 days ago The Ministry had confirmed its suspicions, Voldemort had been a mere pawn for a far greater evilBut all Ministry knows about the mastermind behind Voldemort is that its A Women, her name is Orion and that she permanently resides somewhere in Western Europe under a assumed name, but like the female says to herself "considering they only confirmed Orions existence 46 days ago, the fact that before confirming Orions existence Orion had been covering her tracks for a mere 1 day short of 14 years, 4 months and how well Orions covered her tracks The Ministry has done very good to confirm that the mastermind behind Voldemort is A Women, her name is Orion and that she permanently resides somewhere in Western Europe under a assumed name in a mere 46 days"The person through that Twelnys vision showed the perspective of was clearly very worried, for almost 6 years The Ministry had suspected that Voldemort had been a mere pawn for a far greater evil and a mere 46 days ago The Ministry had confirmed its suspicions, Voldemort had been a mere pawn for a far greater evilBut all Ministry knows about the mastermind behind Voldemort is that its A Women, her name is Orion and that she permanently resides somewhere in Western Europe under a assumed name, but like the female says to herself "considering they only confirmed Orions existence 46 days ago, the fact that before confirming Orions existence Orion had been covering her tracks for a mere 1 day short of 14 years, 4 months and how well Orions covered her tracks The Ministry has done very good to confirm that the mastermind behind Voldemort is A Women, her name is Orion and that she permanently resides somewhere in Western Europe under a assumed name in a mere 46 days""I pray to god that the other rumours aren't true, that Orion is 10's of thousands of years old and is responsible for causing many of histories greatest servants of evil to turn evil"They've only confirmed her existence 46 days ago after she's being hiding for the 14 years, 3 months, 4 weeks, 2 days since Voldemorts death, I wonder did she get careless?, did the ministry get lucky?, is she getting over confident? or is it a trapSince the date is The 1st of September 2,012 and Voldemort died 14 years, 3 months, 4 weeks, 2 days that means that Voldemort died on The 2nd of May 1,998"Among The Muggles are people like Hitler, Al Capone, The Krays, Napoleon, Ceasar, Nero, George The 1st, Cortez, Stalin, numerous kings each of Russia, France and Spain, Genghis Khan and Oliver Cromwell and in modern times Bin Laden, Kadaffi and Putin""Among witch's and wizards are Voldemort, Grindewald, Harpol The Foul, Salazaar Slytherin, Nee-on-Toch, Morganna La Fay, Imoteph and Mordred"Here’s the bit that shows The person whose perspective it is is Hermione GrangerShe watch's as Ginny Weasleys Triplets named Harry, Ron and Neville after 3 people that were very dear to Ginny that died during The War are sorted into Gryfindor and sit in the exact same seats where the original Harry, Ron and Neville 1st sat at The Gryfindor Table 21 years ago(1,991 to 2,012)She thinks to herself "all it needs is A Hermione and in a way the whole Gang would be back together, but for their to be A Hermione I'd have to be dead"Hermione’s survivors guiltHere’s the scene where Hermione thinks of how Harry,, Ron and Neville died"It was 15 months after the war ended, we thought it was over, we thought we'd won, we thought Voldemort was finished, we thought we could move on, start a new beginning in our lives, maybe even start families, we should have known better, we should known Voldemort would have had a backup plan""A Spell of his own creation that ensured that if he died at the second of his death his soul and his killers soul would switch bodies, meaning that Harries Soul died in Voldemorts body and Voldemorts soul lived in Harries body""He told no one other then his daughter Delphini, luckily for us Voldemort didn't know she had chosen us over him, so she knew how to kill him and told us""2 people had to both hit Harry, with Voldemorts Soul inside of it, with Killing Curse's at the exact same time then within the space of 6 seconds those 2 had to hit each other with Killing Curses""Voldemort figured that either no one would figure out how to stop him or no one would have the nerve but he was wrong, Ron and Neville did it, and in a sense of poetic justice they did it in the ruins of Harries parents home where 18 years earlier(1,981 to 1,999) Voldemort murdered Harries parents and tried to murder Harry"This shows that Hermione partially blames herself for the fact that despite her formidable intelligence it never occurred to her that Voldemort had some kind of backup plan? and what do you think of the fact that the story portrays this as a type of survivors guiltThe big revealWhat do you think of the later revelation that the reason for Orions long years is that she's A Alien from The Enterran Race, A Race that even though they can be killed are immune to the passing of time, which is why she's around 15,000 years old? and what do you think of how her actions are motivated by boredom not evil, being almost 15,000 years old and immune to the passage of time gets boring, and once she's gotten bored she indirectly causes the downfall of the 1 she helped, such as using alien magic to help Harry figure out their was a horcrux at Gringotts, help Hermione think of Polyjuice Potion using Belltrixs Hair and help Harry realize their was a horcrux at HogwartsMore infoWhat do you think of how what makes Orion a very morally ambiguous figure is that once she's had her fill of amusing herself by aiding a villain she orchestrates the downfall of that villain, such as when she orchestrated Voldemorts downfall when she'd had her fill of amusing herself by aiding him by using alien magic to help Harry figure out their was a horcrux at Gringotts, help Hermione think of Polyjuice Potion using Belltrixs Hair and help Harry realize their was a horcrux at Hogwarts?</blockquote>

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