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<blockquote data-quote="MythandLore" data-source="post: 160553" data-attributes="member: 180">Hi.I'd try to make the title larger and mak it stand out a bit more.Make the border contrast with the rest of the picture so the picture stands out more.As far as the idea of the leonardo stuff, it's a good idea, but you drawing is to simple, the whole thing about basing stuff off the way he drew was his ideas were overly complex which made them more interesting.I did a quick skectch to show you what I mean, but for yourself try doing a nice drawing (with out using a ruler etc) and scan it in and use them, it will give your picture more life.Also stop doing the little waves in the line, they should be more scratchy less wobbly.I'd also make the letters in the picture larger so they are readable or eliminate them. (I think makeing them larger so they are readable or almost readable would be better)Good luck and have fun, I can't wait to see what you end you doing.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="MythandLore, post: 160553, member: 180"] Hi. I'd try to make the title larger and mak it stand out a bit more. Make the border contrast with the rest of the picture so the picture stands out more. As far as the idea of the leonardo stuff, it's a good idea, but you drawing is to simple, the whole thing about basing stuff off the way he drew was his ideas were overly complex which made them more interesting. I did a quick skectch to show you what I mean, but for yourself try doing a nice drawing (with out using a ruler etc) and scan it in and use them, it will give your picture more life. Also stop doing the little waves in the line, they should be more scratchy less wobbly. I'd also make the letters in the picture larger so they are readable or eliminate them. (I think makeing them larger so they are readable or almost readable would be better) Good luck and have fun, I can't wait to see what you end you doing. [/QUOTE]

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