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<blockquote data-quote="schnee" data-source="post: 7158910" data-attributes="member: 16728">[SUP][/SUP]Take all of this with a grain of salt. I LOVE the idea, I just think it feels a bit too un-Cleric like due to the spell choice.I think the spell list goes for more powerful and arcane-feeling Wizard-like spells when a Cleric spell would probably do. That makes it feel a bit jarring flavor-wise.One example: do you need Dimension Door, when Freedom of Movement allows one to give chase, while resisting the attempts of the fleeing to prevent them from following? Freedom of Movement would create an implacable feel - you can run, but Justice will be following, and none of the impediments you throw in it's way will stop it. Is Haste really the flavor you want? That seems like an unnatural amount of speed, not Cleric-like. Why not Spiritual Guardians? That feels like the wrath of God coming down, and the wrongdoer is slowed down, the deliverer of Justice wreathed by God's agents to bear witness.It's just stuff like that. It's a taste issue, so it may not fit the theme you're going for - maybe you DO want it to be very over-and-above a normal Cleric in feel - but I feel like an agent of holy justice should use more 'divine' feeling spells.HTH man. Looking forward to what it turns in to.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="schnee, post: 7158910, member: 16728"] [SUP][/SUP]Take all of this with a grain of salt. I LOVE the idea, I just think it feels a bit too un-Cleric like due to the spell choice. I think the spell list goes for more powerful and arcane-feeling Wizard-like spells when a Cleric spell would probably do. That makes it feel a bit jarring flavor-wise. One example: do you need Dimension Door, when Freedom of Movement allows one to give chase, while resisting the attempts of the fleeing to prevent them from following? Freedom of Movement would create an implacable feel - you can run, but Justice will be following, and none of the impediments you throw in it's way will stop it. Is Haste really the flavor you want? That seems like an unnatural amount of speed, not Cleric-like. Why not Spiritual Guardians? That feels like the wrath of God coming down, and the wrongdoer is slowed down, the deliverer of Justice wreathed by God's agents to bear witness. It's just stuff like that. It's a taste issue, so it may not fit the theme you're going for - maybe you DO want it to be very over-and-above a normal Cleric in feel - but I feel like an agent of holy justice should use more 'divine' feeling spells. HTH man. Looking forward to what it turns in to. [/QUOTE]

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