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<blockquote data-quote="Zaukrie" data-source="post: 9098601" data-attributes="member: 2057">I was reading an entry in the MCDM monster book, and came across this (the returns/lines are not important here):Electric Pulse. The eel channels energy toward a creature within20 feet of them. The target must make a DC 12 Constitution savingthrow, made with disadvantage if the target is touching theeel. On a failed save, a creature takes 18 (4d8) lightning damageand is dazed until the end of their next turn. On a successfulsave, a creature takes half as much damage and isn’t dazed.And thought, it is still too wordy. Is this better, or worse (note: I think you could take out &quot;of them&quot; also)?Electric Pulse. The eel channels energy toward a creature within&nbsp;20 feet of them. (DC 12 Constitution saving throw, with disadvantage&nbsp;if the target is touching the eel).&nbsp; Failure: the target takes 18 (4d8) lightning damage&nbsp;and is dazed until the end of their next turn. Success: half damage.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Zaukrie, post: 9098601, member: 2057"] I was reading an entry in the MCDM monster book, and came across this (the returns/lines are not important here): Electric Pulse. The eel channels energy toward a creature within 20 feet of them. The target must make a DC 12 Constitution saving throw, made with disadvantage if the target is touching the eel. On a failed save, a creature takes 18 (4d8) lightning damage and is dazed until the end of their next turn. On a successful save, a creature takes half as much damage and isn’t dazed. And thought, it is still too wordy. Is this better, or worse (note: I think you could take out "of them" also)? Electric Pulse. The eel channels energy toward a creature within 20 feet of them. (DC 12 Constitution saving throw, with disadvantage if the target is touching the eel). Failure: the target takes 18 (4d8) lightning damage and is dazed until the end of their next turn. Success: half damage. [/QUOTE]

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