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<blockquote data-quote="Glade Riven" data-source="post: 5474722" data-attributes="member: 86468"><p><span style="color: white">Thanks, Steeldragons, that helps a lot. A few minor adjustments ("youthful" instead of the prepositional phrase "still young," for example).</span></p><p></p><p></p><p> </p><p>Now a few details that will be expanded upon:</p><p><em>Timekeeping</em>: Phaetos circles a typical yellow sun (although on the edge of twilight it looks red in an eternal sunrise/sunset). A gas giant circles the sun a lot closer, with a 24 hour orbit. The eclipse happens on a daily basis, and the shadow (while not nearly encompasing the solar disk) of the gas giant is noticible. On the Dark Side, this effected is noticed in a disruption of the great aurora (magnetic poles equal to solar north and lunar south). Phaetos's orbit is slightly eliptical, which is what allows for seasons.</p><p><em>Habitable zone</em>: the habitable zone is not a narrow band, thanks due to ocean and air currents. While tidally locked, the planet is techtonically active, so there is plenty of vulcanism. Glaciers are constantly melting and being renewed.</p><p><em>A broken planet:</em> One deity, Axios, is trying to fix the problem of Phaetos not rotating on its access. His "holy city" has two sides: the one on the surface appears to be a giant blueprint for a machine. Far underground, he is actually working on the (broken) machine. He is the deity of most civilized orcs.</p><p><em>Vegitation on the Dark Side:</em> I was thinking of something fungal based. Forests of tree-like mushrooms, etc. Kinda like Underdark vegitation, only it can survive the cold temperatures.</p><p> </p><p>Oh, hey, Google-fu found <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/general-rpg-discussion/298697-tidally-locked-campaign-world.html" target="_blank">my old thread</a>. And here's the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/general-rpg-discussion/298908-empire-dwarves.html" target="_blank">Dwarven Empire thread</a>, and the <a href="http://www.enworld.org/forum/general-rpg-discussion/299610-westralia-holy-nation-axios.html" target="_blank">theocracy of Axios thread </a>(Westralia is kinda a stupid name - I need to think up something better).</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Glade Riven, post: 5474722, member: 86468"] [COLOR=white]Thanks, Steeldragons, that helps a lot. A few minor adjustments ("youthful" instead of the prepositional phrase "still young," for example).[/COLOR] Now a few details that will be expanded upon: [I]Timekeeping[/I]: Phaetos circles a typical yellow sun (although on the edge of twilight it looks red in an eternal sunrise/sunset). A gas giant circles the sun a lot closer, with a 24 hour orbit. The eclipse happens on a daily basis, and the shadow (while not nearly encompasing the solar disk) of the gas giant is noticible. On the Dark Side, this effected is noticed in a disruption of the great aurora (magnetic poles equal to solar north and lunar south). Phaetos's orbit is slightly eliptical, which is what allows for seasons. [I]Habitable zone[/I]: the habitable zone is not a narrow band, thanks due to ocean and air currents. While tidally locked, the planet is techtonically active, so there is plenty of vulcanism. Glaciers are constantly melting and being renewed. [I]A broken planet:[/I] One deity, Axios, is trying to fix the problem of Phaetos not rotating on its access. His "holy city" has two sides: the one on the surface appears to be a giant blueprint for a machine. Far underground, he is actually working on the (broken) machine. He is the deity of most civilized orcs. [I]Vegitation on the Dark Side:[/I] I was thinking of something fungal based. Forests of tree-like mushrooms, etc. Kinda like Underdark vegitation, only it can survive the cold temperatures. Oh, hey, Google-fu found [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/general-rpg-discussion/298697-tidally-locked-campaign-world.html"]my old thread[/URL]. And here's the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/general-rpg-discussion/298908-empire-dwarves.html"]Dwarven Empire thread[/URL], and the [URL="http://www.enworld.org/forum/general-rpg-discussion/299610-westralia-holy-nation-axios.html"]theocracy of Axios thread [/URL](Westralia is kinda a stupid name - I need to think up something better). [/QUOTE]
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