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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Velmont" data-source="post: 1978930" data-attributes="member: 13739">I have written a long background for a character on a game that never starts. Too bad, but I expect some day to play him. So, as his background is a nice story in itself, and as I want to save it somewhere, I thought it could be a nice place. So, if you want to say some comments on his background, go on, I am really interested to know what you think of it.First, the stats, just to save them.[SBLOCK=Stats][CODE]Animal Lord (PL5) - Velmont Animal Lord PL: 5 HP: 3 gender: Male age: 23 height: 5'11” weight: 164 lbs size: medium hair: silver eyes: blue with cat-like pupil skin: light blue ~~~ABILITIES~~~ STR 12 +1 DEX 14 +2/+3 CON 12 +1 INT 12 +1 WIS 14 +2/+5 CHA 16 +3/+7 ~~~SAVES~~~ DMG +1 FORT +1 REF +3 WILL +5 ~~~MOVEMENT~~~ INIT +3 SPD 30' (Shapeshifted, Run and Swim: 50\', others 20\') ~~~COMBAT~~~ BASE DEFENSE 1 DEF 14 FLAT 11 MENTAL 16 BASE ATTACK 1 MELEE +2 RANGED +3 MENTAL +3 ~~~SKILLS~~~ Bluff [10/1] Craft (Cooking) [2/1] Diplomacy [10/1] Gather Information [10/1] Knowledge (Literature) [3/2] Profession (Reporter) [8/3] Sense Motive [8/1] * = Trained Only ~~~FEATS~~~ Amphibious (linked - Shapeshift) Darkvision Scent (linked - Shapeshift) Talented (Bluff - Sense Motive) Talented (Diplomatie - Gather Information) ~~~POWERS~~~ ------------------------------------- SUMMONING [+1 pp/rank, 3 total] 3 Ranks - SOURCE: Mystic - SPECIAL: Animal Lord is able to summon animals to help to defend himself. Summoning a creature is not an easy process, as he must be able to both transport the creature to his help and command him to act. This power act like Sorcery [Dazzle, Obscure]. - EXTRAS: Area - FLAW: Excluded Group (Control, Defensive, Divination, Transformation, Transportation), Rote, Slow (Full action to summon) [list]SPELLS - Summon Flying Swarm: Obscure(Sight) - Summon Birds: Dazzle(Sight)[/list] ------------------------------------- SHAPESHIFT [+2 pp/rank, 8 total] 4 Ranks - SOURCE: Mystic - SPECIAL: Animal Lord is able to take the form of any medium or smaller animal. It allows him to move as the creature and gain some of the talent of the creature. All new form retains his silver and/or light blue colour. - EXTRAS: Movement, Shrinking - FLAW: Limited - Animal, Limited - Signature ------------------------------------- ANIMAL FRIENDSHIP [+4 pp/rank, 4 total] 1 Ranks - SOURCE: Mystic - SPECIAL: Animal Lord have the ability to speak with the animals. He can be very convincing too when he need their help. Acting like Telepathy. - EXTRAS: Mind Control, Mind Blank x2 - FLAW: Limited - Animals ------------------------------------- MYSTIC NATURE [+2 pp/rank+9, 17 total] 4 Ranks - SOURCE: Mystic - SPECIAL: His mystic nature have made him better than the human he should be, giving a lot more splendour, some more empathy and grace. The basic power is acting like Super-Charisma - P EXTRAS: Super-Wisdom 3 - P EXTRAS: Super-Dexterity 1 ------------------------------------- DREAMING [+2 pp/rank, 2 total] 1 Ranks - SOURCE: Mystic - SPECIAL: Animal Lord seems to make dreams about another man that looks like what he is becoming. Is that man real? Is he coming from the past, the future or from another world? All are unanswered questions, but his dreams are definitively linked to his own life, even if they are more obscure. Acting like Postcognition. - EXTRAS: Precognition - FLAW: Uncontrolled, Limited: Lord's Life, Restricted: Dream - STUNTS: ------------------------------------- ~~~WEAKNESSES (20 PTS. MAX)~~~ QUIRK [WARD] (minor) - For an unknown reason, Animal Lord's life is linked to the girl next door. Is it something related to those dreams? Is it some attraction? Is it simply she is the symbol of his new goal, being some kind of protector? Whatever the reason, if Animal Lord ever learns something happening to her, he may desert to go to her help. The base DC to resist this lure is 10, but can be modified depending of the situation in which Animal Lord is, and by the gravity of the event happening to the girl next door. ~~~COST~~~ ABILITIES [20] BASE ATT [3] BASE DEF [2] SKILLS [10] FEATS [8] POWERS [34] WEAKNESS [-2] TOTAL [75] UNSPENT [0] [/CODE] [/SBLOCK]And let's the story begin...</blockquote>

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