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Message: <blockquote data-quote="Rel" data-source="post: 47122" data-attributes="member: 99">Well, Milo, you clearly have a talent for providing detail when you describe your combats.  I don't really mind that (I am usually pretty detailed with the combats in my own Story Hour).But, in light of the fact that your story is told from the perspective of Milo and not the 3rd person of the GM, perhaps you could strike a medium.  Maybe you could detail the fight from Milo's perspective, discussing his every swing with Reft and Rend.  But with regard to the other characters, you could more simply describe the outcomes without discussing every blow.Just a thought.  Keep up the good work.  I'm having a lot of fun reading it.</blockquote>